Deciding of the Picnic Spot

Let’s go there, her way…
Her village and she thrive.
For I see, my tall friend
Summers warmer,
Land more lush
Sky more blue
Men more humble more gentle
Women more simple higher in grace
Olds own there more wisdom
Youth there are younger.
There’s water so snowy there’re pastures—so unbound.
There fall the falls so high
There’re the woods so dense.
And there’s air so pure,
Fragrant, and so fluent!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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April 17, 2014 at 12:15 AM
FB, I am sorry not to have been around for a few months but I have been busy publishing my collection...it is finally out! I am now in the process of writing a novel of which I have two publishers interested, but I need to get it done so I will not be around for several months to come...but I thank you for you kind words and I miss reading you r works...but will be bac . Sinclair
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February 14, 2014 at 10:09 AM
Another interesting piece! Your poetry is, to me like an enigmatic puzzle...but, as I read past your words, I am delighted when I finally put the puzzle together!...Again, my friend FB, "Very Nice Pen"!//Sinclair
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April 16, 2014 at 10:23 PM
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April 16, 2014 at 10:23 PM
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April 16, 2014 at 10:22 PM
Dear Sir, Robert:- I miss you, truly and badly! If you come again and comment on my pen?
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February 14, 2014 at 10:40 PM
Thanks again sir.
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