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Deciding of the Picnic Spot

Let’s go there, her way… Her village and she thrive. For I see, my tall friend Summers warmer, Land more lush Sky more blue Men more humble more gentle Women more simple higher in grace Olds own there more wisdom Youth there are younger. There’s water so snowy there’re pastures—so unbound. There fall the falls so high There’re the woods so dense. And there’s air so pure, Fragrant, and so fluent!

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Date: 4/17/2014 12:15:00 AM
FB, I am sorry not to have been around for a few months but I have been busy publishing my collection...it is finally out! I am now in the process of writing a novel of which I have two publishers interested, but I need to get it done so I will not be around for several months to come...but I thank you for you kind words and I miss reading you r works...but will be bac . Sinclair
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Date: 2/14/2014 10:09:00 AM
Another interesting piece! Your poetry is, to me like an enigmatic puzzle...but, as I read past your words, I am delighted when I finally put the puzzle together!...Again, my friend FB, "Very Nice Pen"!//Sinclair
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Date: 4/16/2014 10:23:00 PM
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Date: 4/16/2014 10:23:00 PM
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Date: 4/16/2014 10:22:00 PM
Dear Sir, Robert:- I miss you, truly and badly! If you come again and comment on my pen?
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Date: 2/14/2014 10:40:00 PM
Thanks again sir.

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