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Deception

Deception You make a tangled mess when you deceive, concocting up a lie upon a lie, changing beliefs that someone else perceives. It leaves one with a headache and a sigh. Concocting up a lie upon a lie, you cover all the leads to any clue. It leaves one with a headache and a sigh. We'll find out everything, that isn't true. You cover all the leads to any clue preventing truth from ever being known. We'll find out everything, that isn't true. You'll clearly know the fault is all your own. Preventing truth from ever being known, within a web of lies are you involved. You'll clearly know the fault is all your own. Cause deep within the soul, you’re not evolved. Within a web of lies are you involved, changing beliefs that someone else perceives. Cause deep within the soul, you’re not evolved. You make a tangled mess when you deceive. 10/10/17

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Date: 10/19/2017 2:56:00 PM
Hi Janis, This is a well written write that has much wisdom. I agree with Kim, this is great description of deception. Congratulations on your HM:-) Alexis
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Date: 10/19/2017 12:37:00 PM
I hate to be lied to Janis yet some are so expert they don't even realise they are doing it:-( many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 10/19/2017 11:21:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Janis!
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Date: 10/19/2017 5:28:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Janis, so well written. :))
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Date: 10/18/2017 9:28:00 PM
Congratulations Janis on your fine win with your beautiful well-written poem.
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Date: 10/18/2017 8:59:00 PM
An apt description of deception! Congrats on your placement!
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Date: 10/11/2017 10:40:00 AM
I dislike liars and those who like to fool others with gossip and lies.. You have done a very good pantoum here.. It rhymes and flows very well.. Good luck in the contest..
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