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Deception

It was a less-than-happy Lovers' Day. I'd never seen the like in all my life. So, while the cat's away, the mice will play, for someone sent a present to my wife! I'd stayed late at the office (after all, we had the Prenton contract to complete). I hadn't found the time to text, or call. We'd made no firm arrangements where to eat. It was a cake. "I Love You", looped in pink. I felt like I was living out some song by Kenny Rogers. What else could I think? Conclusions that are jumped to, can be wrong. Yes, I'd deceived myself, for it was she who'd bought the cake, and cut it - just for me!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 3/11/2017 4:13:00 PM
Great sonnet. The ending surprised me. VBR
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Date: 2/27/2017 2:51:00 PM
Wonderful...You thought she was thinking of another when she was only thinking of you
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Date: 2/27/2017 3:02:00 AM
(You decide to wait for me to sleep in this hospital bed before you suddenly produce a load of poems 0.o) Hah, I love this sonnet, the final two lines are great! It leads you, this sonnet, to indeed start with the wrong idea. Love it :)
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Michael Coy
Date: 2/27/2017 9:52:00 AM
I'm glad to hear you're going home.
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Darren White
Date: 2/27/2017 3:25:00 AM
yeah, but i'm about to go home again.Hospitals and I are great friends ;)
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Michael Coy
Date: 2/27/2017 3:11:00 AM
Hospital bed ????

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