Deception

It was a less-than-happy Lovers' Day. 
I'd never seen the like in all my life. 
So, while the cat's away, the mice will play, 
for someone sent a present to my wife! 

I'd stayed late at the office (after all, 
we had the Prenton contract to complete). 
I hadn't found the time to text, or call. 
We'd made no firm arrangements where to eat. 

It was a cake. "I Love You", looped in pink. 
I felt like I was living out some song 
by Kenny Rogers. What else could I think? 
Conclusions that are jumped to, can be wrong. 

Yes, I'd deceived myself, for it was she 
who'd bought the cake, and cut it - just for me!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Rogers Blk Panther Avatar
March 11, 2017 at 4:13 PM
Great sonnet. The ending surprised me. VBR
Smith Avatar
February 27, 2017 at 2:51 PM
Wonderful...You thought she was thinking of another when she was only thinking of you
White Avatar
February 27, 2017 at 3:02 AM
(You decide to wait for me to sleep in this hospital bed before you suddenly produce a load of poems 0.o) Hah, I love this sonnet, the final two lines are great! It leads you, this sonnet, to indeed start with the wrong idea. Love it :)
Coy Avatar
February 27, 2017 at 9:52 AM
I'm glad to hear you're going home.
White Avatar
February 27, 2017 at 3:25 AM
yeah, but i'm about to go home again.Hospitals and I are great friends ;)
Coy Avatar
February 27, 2017 at 3:11 AM
Hospital bed ????
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