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Age is not all decay; it is the ripening, the swelling, of the fresh life within, that withers and bursts the husk. George MacDonald
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In a world where decay is dominant, Arctic tundra is melting, and envy is prominent. Friendship withered away with the lapse of time, Moon gapes at all facts and truths, concomitant. We jive in death-cool air and chime, Where dreams and hopes start to climb. As though molehills faded into the grass, Rapture rain has turned into melting rime. In a place where the sky spills tears of brass, And the howling winds bestow a deafening bass. We lingered in the natural ephemeral support, Behind the murky cloud of the ebbing mass Our bond, however, was not flexible to contort, Cyclic in the way that orchestral drums distort. We carried out a solemn pledge on the floor, In divine draughts, brambles flood the report. The Meadow Brook gave us richness galore, Black valleys where floods shred and roar? We could not deny such a reservoir of devotion, As with the wilting branches and dwindling door. Our bonds faded, plagued by wide demotion, Secrets below the land, a flurry of blades of notion. In a world where deterioration prevails supreme, Time and distance cast a curtain on our emotions. But even amid such decay, there is a dream, Darkening and drooping, we creep and esteem. With the truth that humanity may split and slope, Crows chirp as they drop twigs and scream. While passing across acrid rings of mope, Our ties are fraying. Teach me how to hope. It shines brightly behind the gloomy overlay, A dazzling beacon in the depths to grope. In this universe of inexorable decay, We acquire courage with each raw day. With percussive pulses of love and delight, Our ties will last for a span we cannot deny. In a world where decay holds its might, We defy its grasp, shining with an inner light. Through the drills and tribulations we face, Whatever embers burn our ego and sight.

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Date: 9/10/2023 10:54:00 PM
Sotto, wonderful writing and congratulations on your win in my contest, I love your image, the music and quote also, Constance
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Date: 9/10/2023 8:56:00 PM
"In a world where decay holds its might, We defy its grasp, shining with an inner light" - Beautifully written. Congratulations!
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Date: 9/10/2023 8:32:00 PM
"In this universe of inexorable decay, We acquire courage with each raw day. With percussive pulses of love and delight, Our ties will last for a span we cannot deny." Despite the signs of decay everywhere, all is not lost. There are beams of light filtering through the dark. This robust optimism pulls us along and sustains lives. So beautifully drafted. Congratulations on your first place win dear friend!
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Date: 9/10/2023 2:07:00 PM
Back Sotto..CONGRATULATIONS to you too on the win. with this masterpiece. Really deep. Stunning Sotto!
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Date: 9/10/2023 1:35:00 PM
A huge CONGRATS on your win with this masterfully-composed piece, Lasaad! Janice
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Date: 9/10/2023 11:37:00 AM
Ofcourse I knew you would win, you deserve all the accolades! Congratulations my friend
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Date: 9/10/2023 10:11:00 AM
Whenever you touch a topic. You never leave a stone unturned. Rhythm and phonetic rhyme are added attractions. Big Congrats to win.
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Date: 9/7/2023 10:25:00 PM
Beautiful and wise words from you, SP, as always, so eloquently penned in a rhythm that touches the heart.
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Date: 9/6/2023 10:08:00 AM
Beautiful poem. With all the decay in life, there always is a beacon of hope and salvation.
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Date: 9/6/2023 5:12:00 AM
- "We jive in death-cool air and chime ... In a place where the sky spills tears of brass" ... of inexorable decay and ego ... a wonderful poem, Las :) - hugs
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Date: 9/5/2023 10:24:00 PM
Friendship withered away with time and in this world where theres so many climactic chaos, and envy so common, all i could say too is “ teach me how to hope” as always your rhymes and the way you phrase such wisdom and hope in a soul warming manner is truly impressive. Your flow of words, is seamless and depth of every line is so deeply meaningful. You amaze me everytime! I am in awe of the way you’ve written about worldly issues. I hope we all shine from that inner light amidst fraying ties
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Date: 9/5/2023 7:06:00 PM
"As though molehills fade into the grass" I guess they never have a chance to become a mountain. Lasaad you have taken aging and decay to another level, in a world where deterioration prevails supreme. Your word on the topic of decay, reign supreme. A truly wonderful poem. A favorite of mine now.
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