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"The seasons of all things hold much in store- for life brings death- which brings new life once more." _by Poet. Before my window, on this winter day, I see the dead, cold landscape spreading far in stages of this season's own decay- with muddied snow and blackened ice which are now shielding winter sleep beneath the scar upon what was once grass of velvet green with lush and lovely trees to fill the scene; now morphing, waiting as decay to rise in beauty once again, brand new, pristine- below the bright and sunny, springtime skies. February 4, 2022 Contest: D Forms - Dizain Poetry Sponsor: Constane LaFrance Theme Chosen: 2. Decay Disdain: a b a b b c c d c d

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Date: 2/14/2022 3:03:00 PM
Sandra, congratulations on your First Place win in my D Form-Dizain contest with your excellent and I love the image and your quote ~ Constance
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Date: 2/8/2022 2:19:00 PM
This is a skilled and effective application of the Dizain form. As well as impressing with technique, it conveys a a lovely, uplifting message with convincing imagery. Well done! Sandra
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Date: 2/5/2022 10:54:00 AM
It must really be cold in your home! Aloha!
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