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Death's Door

caves of agony hold my captured force fed form weapons befriend and kill me blood sport brings death's teeth the desiccating sun burns my short sword and shield hold sway what care I for wealth freedom but a word unclaimed a surly jest made by God's only through death freed may Hades receive my hosts coin less beggars to Charon* fodder for hells cages I as they will live victim and victor dancing savior and devil howl "nay!" for winning means hell scared gladiator rise again your feathered helmet gleaming victory or death *Charon is the boat man who ferries the death to Hades/ Hell but he will not cross your soul without being paid.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 7/27/2012 11:21:00 PM
Wow! - another masterpiece Debbie - perhaps you are a true master of this craft - Lots of rich metaphysics in this piece,freedom,death,wealth,arrogance,humility,etcetera - simply, a superb command of language & imagination - J.A.B. "From that undiscovered country from whose born,no travel returns..."
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Date: 6/6/2012 9:13:00 PM
I enjoy your choka here tonight too, Debs. I wonder why it didn't make the list with the others!!
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 6/7/2012 8:15:00 AM
perhaps causd Amy why she wanted a verse about Roman's in a Japanese form ;) I never did know when to keep my mouth shut LOL we should have at least been able to do samuri?
Date: 6/3/2012 10:51:00 AM
Deb, a great write, reminds of the Golden Fleece...soup mail...David
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Date: 6/2/2012 6:55:00 PM
my helmet is gleaming victory,so is yours after writing this great piece.Debbie
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