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I cannot see a mauve rose without falling tears, mother- even after all these long years; the sweet scent makes me weep, weep, I close my eyes and see them all again, draped; on your casket- on the ground some have escaped, most days, I can bury this memory deep, deep. __________________________ June 17, 2018 Written for the contest, When Line Six is a Perfect Fix Sponsor, Silent One First Place

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Date: 6/23/2018 9:25:00 PM
Congratulations on your great win, Broken Wings, beautiful imagery :) ... Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 6/22/2018 5:10:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this touching poem of memories of your mother. Thought of mine too.
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Date: 6/20/2018 8:11:00 PM
Your poem is breathtaking in its heartfelt depths of beautiful sadness so exquisitely expressed, Broken Wings.. Congratulations on your excellent win! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 6/20/2018 7:06:00 PM
- An excellent poem on 6 lines,B.B. :) - It must have been difficult to judge, I think everyone is amazing, with different themes - Congratulations on a well deserved 1st place in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise: )
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Date: 6/20/2018 7:01:00 PM
A great tribute for your Mom, a great and well-deserved win too Constance. Mick
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Date: 6/20/2018 4:43:00 PM
Congratulations on your fine win, Constance!
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Date: 6/20/2018 4:26:00 PM
Congrats BW, on your first place win.
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Date: 6/20/2018 3:11:00 PM
Sad six lines BW... Congratulations on your first place in the contest..
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Date: 6/17/2018 5:49:00 PM
A lovely tribute to the mom you love...draped with sadness. <3 Kim
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