Deathbed Sonnet

And even after all that time had passed;
            my moon had set above another sun,
it seems my heart was still at odds with past;
            my tongue at war with words I left unsung.

This bed of ardor caught between my teeth,
            will thus remain, and even grow post haste,
where all the while, there's nothing I'll bequeath 
            excepting flowers scent, above my waste.

And so it goes with every vacant beast,
            as twenty-twenty sees - I should have done!
I should have said; I should have been, at least
            a man awake to seed his endless sun.

And as the night descends upon my thought,
            remember son these words that, I lived not.




© Kristin Reynolds 3 11 09
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Guzzi Avatar
April 13, 2012 at 2:55 PM
English Sonnet very well done too! If you're still around why not enter it in my sonnet contest? Light & Love
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September 30, 2009 at 4:44 PM
Excellent sonnet, Kristen! Congratulations on your first round success and best of luck in the finals! Love, Robin
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September 25, 2009 at 9:04 AM
Kristin! What an enchanting poem to win in the semi final among the two of your beautiful work. Best wishes in the Finals. -Mohammad
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September 25, 2009 at 4:43 AM
Dear Kristen. Magnificant writing. Best wishes through to the next round. Love, Lainie
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September 24, 2009 at 7:12 PM
Kristin ~Congratulations on making the finals with your two poems! Laura :)
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September 24, 2009 at 1:29 PM
Dear Kristin, Congratulations on getting through the first round of the poetry contest with two great poems! Luck and love, Carolyn
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September 24, 2009 at 12:33 PM
Kristin, congratulations in getting past round one of the competition >> James,x
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September 5, 2009 at 7:55 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week, Kristin>>James
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September 2, 2009 at 12:30 PM
This is a well deserved feature … what a creative, wonderful poem, I love every bit of it. You are such a great poet. Please keep writing and congrats on your poem being featured this week. Hope to read more of your wonderful pieces. You are great ! Adeleke
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September 2, 2009 at 7:39 AM
Hi, Kristin. Congrats on this fine work. Right up to your usual amazing standard. Love, daver
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September 1, 2009 at 5:31 AM
Congratulations Kristin, on having your well-written poem featured this week. It entices the mind and soul to evaluate itself... sooner. Keep writing. Lovingly, Dane
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September 1, 2009 at 2:13 AM
Kristin, I haven't seen you around. I hope things are okay and congratulations on your feature this week...Raul
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August 31, 2009 at 5:26 PM
Good use of rhyme and imagery for an interesting perspective. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Keep on writing! Wishing you continued success. Karen
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August 31, 2009 at 4:20 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Kristin. Hope to see many more of yours featured. Love, Carol
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August 31, 2009 at 12:11 AM
Congrats on your featured poem this week Kristin.Rgds Brian
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March 18, 2009 at 4:03 PM
Strong emotion. You put great passion in your poetry! Love, Carolyn
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March 15, 2009 at 5:11 AM
A flawless sonnet with your customary fine flow and rhyming. Excellent job! Love, Keith
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March 13, 2009 at 12:44 PM
A perfect Sonnet, Kristin. Such deep emotions run through this. It is always easy to look back and see so clearly the things we "should have done and said". Excellent piece, Kristen! Love, Robin
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March 12, 2009 at 11:07 AM
Deep purposes and in hindsight who can tell where they went.... touching and sad Kristin..... but still, as ever, beautiful done
Austin Avatar
March 12, 2009 at 9:08 AM
Hi, kristin. Suppose this is what Carter saw upon that so ancient face when he unwrapped the endless white cover. I would suppose the message must be eternal. Great write, Kristin. Love, daver
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March 11, 2009 at 9:09 PM
Nice poem Kristin, deep and sad. I am trying to picture you in dreads though....J/K...Raul
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March 11, 2009 at 6:50 PM
Just for the record, you wre always legit in my mind..just for the record..thanks for the comments..very close...much love, rasta.
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March 11, 2009 at 10:13 AM
Very moving, Kristin.
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March 11, 2009 at 8:22 AM
As I wipe away my own tears of regret I write to you a thank you for sometimes it is that we just need a good cry. This is a piece that is written straight from the soul of the writer and so moving. peace, Love and Light be with you. Smiles from Lolita
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March 11, 2009 at 6:50 AM
I am not going to try to interpret what I feel from this. It is well written with deeply personal feelings from your past. Powerful ending. Love, Shar
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