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Death Valley

What lives deep within? Which thoughts, what vitality? For from these must we emerge, As there is little without Except the baleful wind Whining across bleached dunes. Death is a void of expression Stark, barren, arid. Mere rocks scoured by flash flood Twisted and gnarled; Gravestones of salt extrusion From emergent times. What life there is in Death Valley Lives underground and waits For night or brief rain; But then it must express Whatever it is, for death Is to fail to come forth. There are two deaths In Death Valley: The first is not to emerge When that moment comes, The second is that there is Nothing to emerge.

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Date: 1/6/2021 8:46:00 PM
This is exactly how I picture Death Valley to be. Wow! I've never been there. I take it you have.
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Date: 12/15/2020 7:01:00 AM
Your pen writes a wonderful picture. What an ending. Enjoy your day writing away...............
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Date: 12/15/2020 4:16:00 AM
Beautifully done. Love your work.
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Date: 12/15/2020 1:21:00 AM
A spectacular painting of the harsh reality of death in a metaphor that expresses this brilliantly, Aloha, Connie
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Date: 12/14/2020 6:54:00 PM
Very well done for describing a desolate place and humanity
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