Death Ushers Us Away

'Tis a mystery when death will come
but come it will, and rue the day
that darkly laden hour and it's reckoning.
And whether unforeseen, or by degrees
in the midst of life, or from ravages of age
our souls will thus depart
our bodies decay.

A nemesis of the living, death crouches 
like a prowling panther, ready to strike
and we, yet unaware, are its prey.
Death licks its thirsty chops
it plans and plots, to take us 
without delay.

Oh, hear those melancholy notes death plays
disrupting the beautiful melodies of life
discordant sounds that bring great strife
demanding to bring us 
to an abrupt end.

But, for a brief span in time
we stand and sing our debut song
each soul brings music to be played
in this grand symphony we call life.
Then the final stanza comes
the part when death enters in
to usher us to our final end
to a place far away 
from the living.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Marcum Wong Avatar
November 6, 2018 at 2:35 PM
I see congratulations are warranted for this lovely winning top winner! This reads like a lovely sad song dotted by the joys of life. Beautiful Laura! : )
Leiser Avatar
November 6, 2018 at 2:56 PM
Thank you, Connie! I’m so glad you like it :) As I read it now, I am saddened that death ushered my dad away this past July. But I know he is with the Lord in heaven now.
Gauthier Avatar
June 2, 2018 at 8:48 PM
Congrats on your top win, Laura. Well done.
Leiser Avatar
June 2, 2018 at 9:16 PM
Thank you, Line! :)
La France Avatar
May 19, 2018 at 10:37 PM
Laura congratulations on your win in my contest with this excellent write, well done ~
Leiser Avatar
May 19, 2018 at 10:57 PM
Thank you so much for my placement in your contest, Constance! I am so glad you liked it! Hugs from Laura. :)
Gentry Avatar
May 19, 2018 at 9:53 AM
Congratulations on your win with this poem about death. Well done!
Leiser Avatar
May 19, 2018 at 6:18 PM
Thank you, Susan. :)
Rodrigues Avatar
May 18, 2018 at 2:29 PM
Congrats, Laura!
Leiser Avatar
May 19, 2018 at 6:18 PM
Thank you, Kim. :)
Allison Avatar
May 18, 2018 at 2:16 PM
Many congrats on your win Laura:-) hugs Jan xx
Leiser Avatar
May 19, 2018 at 6:17 PM
Thank you, Jan. :)
Andresen Avatar
May 18, 2018 at 12:22 PM
- A poem about death represent the emotional ... we have all death in wait   - That's how it's always been, but still difficult - Congratulations on your 1st place in the contest, Laura :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Leiser Avatar
May 19, 2018 at 6:17 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise. :)
Gondolf Avatar
May 18, 2018 at 11:45 AM
Life is brief and we must live it to the fullest before death ushers us away. Congrats on your win, Laura, very well penned verse. John
Leiser Avatar
May 18, 2018 at 11:59 AM
Thank you, John. There is hope, as you know, as a Christian..death will usher me to Jesus and heaven, praise the Lord!
Onclaud Avatar
May 17, 2018 at 11:52 AM
may you seize all that is life- giving so that when death comes, you are free... written with much grace, laura!,,huggs
Leiser Avatar
May 17, 2018 at 1:05 PM
Thanks, Nette. I appreciate your comments. :)
Hagy Avatar
May 16, 2018 at 10:51 PM
I love the feel of this piece Laura :) I also like the black panther analogy better than say the grim reaper...nice write :) Have a lovely day
Leiser Avatar
May 17, 2018 at 10:13 AM
Thank you for commenting, Chris. I’m glad you liked my poem!
DiMino Avatar
May 16, 2018 at 6:57 PM
Love it! Great writing! It seems all fine writers visit this subject. Reminded I am of "The Conquerer Worm," a longtime favorite of mine.
Leiser Avatar
May 16, 2018 at 8:09 PM
I must read that poem! Thanks for stopping by and commenting, Joe!
Parker Avatar
May 16, 2018 at 6:49 PM
the older one gets the more real the contemplation of death is...good luck in the contest
Leiser Avatar
May 16, 2018 at 8:08 PM
So true, Frederic! Thank you for your commenting :)
Cunningham Avatar
May 16, 2018 at 2:08 PM
It's so important to live life to the full, because death will surely come to us all. Good luck in the contest. Tom.
Leiser Avatar
May 16, 2018 at 2:55 PM
I agree, Tom. Just knowing we will die someday makes life more precious. Thanks for your comments..
Andresen Avatar
May 16, 2018 at 1:57 PM
- Death is part of life - To die is the most natural man doing besides being born, but we rarely talk about death - A great poem, Laura - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Leiser Avatar
May 16, 2018 at 2:54 PM
Thank you for commenting, Anne-Lise. Yes, death is an inevitable part of life, indeed..,
Turner Avatar
May 16, 2018 at 12:52 PM
Nicely penned Laura. Sadly, there will be no curtain call.
Leiser Avatar
May 16, 2018 at 1:19 PM
Thank you for your comments, Daniel. Yes, death is our inevitable call.
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