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Death of Friend

Death Of Friend _ ________ I fight the crying dawn of Winter your flowered love....dissolve Through drifting wind without avail a thief had come at dawn And now...........now A final curtain drawn Where misty rain drops fall in silence I sing a bitter song The room so still...without avail Another lonely dawn And in my dreams For you I wait..... _

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 7/24/2018 10:58:00 PM
Rick, your poignant poem is dynamic and dramatic in its emotional imagery and full of sad beauty. Exquisite poetry. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 7/10/2018 12:48:00 PM
Great poem with so few words but full of emotion, loss and sorrow Almost made me cry. Congrats on your placement in the contest, Rick.
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Date: 7/8/2018 9:40:00 PM
Sorry of your loss, Rick, your write is so endearing ..Congratulations on your awesome win! Hugs Eve
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Date: 7/7/2018 8:22:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. This is so real, the feelings plaintive, lonely, sad. This is good. A fave.
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Date: 7/7/2018 7:29:00 AM
Congrats on your top win, Rick.
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Date: 7/5/2018 6:06:00 AM
Rick, so emotive. Your poem impacts the mood immediately. Powerful write!
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Date: 7/4/2018 6:18:00 PM
I have lost so many friends, and you have expressed the feelings so well.
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