Death of Darkness

Savior’s savoir faire... Dayspring astride white stallion ...the darkness lights hell 5/20/2018

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J.W. Earnings

Date: 5/28/2018 7:25:00 AM

So powerful and descriptive poem here.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/11/2018 10:32:00 AM

Thanks, J.W.!

Susan Ashley

Date: 5/23/2018 8:54:00 PM

Your senryu is strikingly beautiful, Kim. Each line is so deep and dramatic. I especially love the word play of your first line. Warmest wishes and hugs.. ~Susan

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/23/2018 9:45:00 PM

Thank you, Susan <3

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/22/2018 3:04:00 PM

I too enjoyed the contrast in this one, Kim. Well done.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/22/2018 7:33:00 PM

Thanks, Andrea!

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 5/22/2018 9:21:00 AM

I like the contrasting ideas of 'white stallion' and 'darkness lights hell' - nicely done!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/22/2018 7:32:00 PM

Thanks, Michelle!