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Death of a Pine

Adopted early after birth Replanted back into the earth From small to tall, a tiny root Withstanding all and resolute It whispered and it whistled Every wind song that it knew It's verdant needles bristled Glistening in frost and dew A friend to all both large and small Seeking refuge in it's shade To rest and recline, to the fresh smell of pine And a songbird serenade From green, to red, to rust, to brown Giving all it had left, back to the ground A pine that spent it's time worthwhile Living life with grace and dying with style It taught me how to dance in the wind Whenever it howls, be willing to bend It taught me how to whistle a song While giving back, as life moves along Like you and I, trees live and die When death comes young we question "why?" The answer is, it's all by design Down to the death of a hardy young pine. Daniel Turner

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Date: 4/23/2025 8:52:00 AM
I love this beautiful poem, Daniel. I'm making it a favorite.
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Daniel Turner
Date: 4/23/2025 9:06:00 AM
Hello Ann. Thank you so much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment. Three of my young pine trees died last summer and they were the inspiration for this poem. I am glad you enjoyed it:) Great to see you again as always. Take care and God Bless.
Date: 3/16/2025 1:20:00 AM
How delightfully it rolls while reading. I love brevity lines that impart so much. Oh, I just posted one that a pervert would probably enjoy, so I thought of you -'Passion'. Poetry Hugs ... CayCay
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Date: 2/7/2025 6:57:00 AM
Wow! This is another amazing rhyme from your golden pen my dear poet friend, Daniel! I love this and enjoyed immensely. I'll fave it and of course you, as one of my fave poet rhymer. Thank you so much. I'll be back soon to read more. God bless you always and thank you so much for your visit. Great to see you again. Hugs
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Date: 2/1/2025 1:32:00 PM
A wonderful tribute to your beloved trees. Beautifully written Daniel. Love and respect within each line.
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Daniel Turner
Date: 2/1/2025 1:42:00 PM
Thank you, Sandy. At least something good came from their deaths. Wonderful to see you again. I hope life is treating you kindly.
Date: 1/28/2025 8:23:00 PM
Very thought provoking write. As a nature lover, I really enjoyed the piece... especially the second stanza. Death has never been far from my thoughts. This poem makes it less scary. Thanks for the visit.
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Daniel Turner
Date: 1/29/2025 5:19:00 AM
Hello Eileen:) Thank you so much for stopping by to read and comment. I pray all is well with you and yours.
Date: 1/28/2025 3:59:00 PM
Enjoyed the poetic details of your work, daniel...ourstanding!
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Daniel Turner
Date: 1/29/2025 5:18:00 AM
Thank you, Nette. Wonderful to see you again. I hope life is treating you kindly.
Date: 1/28/2025 10:55:00 AM
I really like what this one says. It has good rhythm, flow and rhyme. I enjoy all of the above of the pines except when they bloom, I feel quite ill. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Sara K
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Daniel Turner
Date: 1/28/2025 11:06:00 AM
Thank you Sara. I had 3 young pines die last fall and I have no idea why so I wrote this poem. I have lots of trees and I planted every one of them. They are like my children.
Date: 1/28/2025 7:21:00 AM
There's a worthwhile message in the death of your pine(s). We should learn to bend with the wind when it howls, for if not, we could be broken. You better not stop writing since these last three poems are indicative of your talent... You know what I think of your poetic skill, so keep them coming.
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Lin Lane
Date: 1/28/2025 7:42:00 AM
The only hands you need are those applauding your poetry. ;-)
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Daniel Turner
Date: 1/28/2025 7:36:00 AM
Thank you my dear friend. None of it would be possible without the support of more talented people like you who always encourage with kindness and are always willing to lend a hand:)
Date: 1/28/2025 6:43:00 AM
Beautiful piece Daniel. xomo
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Daniel Turner
Date: 1/28/2025 7:01:00 AM
Thank you, Mo. I appreciate your time and support. How's life been treating you? I hope all is well with you and yours.
Date: 1/28/2025 5:36:00 AM
Well done Daniel, it flows so nicely! Hope all is well with you.
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Daniel Turner
Date: 1/28/2025 7:00:00 AM
Hello Mark. Great to see you again. Yes by the grace of God Im still kicking. Thanks for dropping in. I hope life is treating you kindly, as well.

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