Death of a Pine

Adopted early after birth
Replanted back into the earth
From small to tall, a tiny root
Withstanding all and resolute

It whispered and it whistled
Every wind song that it knew
It's verdant needles bristled
Glistening in frost and dew

A friend to all both large and small
Seeking refuge in it's shade
To rest and recline, with the fresh smell of pine
And a songbird serenade

From green, to red, to rust, to brown
Giving all it had left, back to the ground
A pine that spent it's time worthwhile
Living life with grace and dying with style

It taught me how to dance in the wind
Whenever it howls, be willing to bend
It taught me how to whistle a song
While giving back, as life moves along

Like you and I, trees live and die
When death comes young we question "why?"
The answer is, it's all by design
Down to the death of a hardy young pine.

                     Daniel Turner
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Delaney Avatar
August 22, 2025 at 5:22 AM
I love this poem, Daniel. It captures the fortunes of natures in the fragility or strength of it and how that can fluctuate. A real favorite for me.
Turner Avatar
August 22, 2025 at 3:48 PM
Thank you SuZ. Im glad you liked it. So great to see you again. I hope all is well with you and yours.
Peck Avatar
April 23, 2025 at 8:52 AM
I love this beautiful poem, Daniel. I'm making it a favorite.
Turner Avatar
April 23, 2025 at 9:06 AM
Hello Ann. Thank you so much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment. Three of my young pine trees died last summer and they were the inspiration for this poem. I am glad you enjoyed it:) Great to see you again as always. Take care and God Bless.
Godwin Avatar
March 16, 2025 at 1:20 AM
How delightfully it rolls while reading. I love brevity lines that impart so much. Oh, I just posted one that a pervert would probably enjoy, so I thought of you -'Passion'. Poetry Hugs ... CayCay
Gasun Avatar
February 7, 2025 at 6:57 AM
Wow! This is another amazing rhyme from your golden pen my dear poet friend, Daniel! I love this and enjoyed immensely. I'll fave it and of course you, as one of my fave poet rhymer. Thank you so much. I'll be back soon to read more. God bless you always and thank you so much for your visit. Great to see you again. Hugs
Manassian Avatar
January 28, 2025 at 8:23 PM
Very thought provoking write. As a nature lover, I really enjoyed the piece... especially the second stanza. Death has never been far from my thoughts. This poem makes it less scary. Thanks for the visit.
Turner Avatar
January 29, 2025 at 5:19 AM
Hello Eileen:) Thank you so much for stopping by to read and comment. I pray all is well with you and yours.
Onclaud Avatar
January 28, 2025 at 3:59 PM
Enjoyed the poetic details of your work, daniel...ourstanding!
Turner Avatar
January 29, 2025 at 5:18 AM
Thank you, Nette. Wonderful to see you again. I hope life is treating you kindly.
Kendrick Avatar
January 28, 2025 at 10:55 AM
I really like what this one says. It has good rhythm, flow and rhyme. I enjoy all of the above of the pines except when they bloom, I feel quite ill. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Sara K
Turner Avatar
January 28, 2025 at 11:06 AM
Thank you Sara. I had 3 young pines die last fall and I have no idea why so I wrote this poem. I have lots of trees and I planted every one of them. They are like my children.
Lane Avatar
January 28, 2025 at 7:21 AM
There's a worthwhile message in the death of your pine(s). We should learn to bend with the wind when it howls, for if not, we could be broken. You better not stop writing since these last three poems are indicative of your talent... You know what I think of your poetic skill, so keep them coming.
Lane Avatar
January 28, 2025 at 7:42 AM
The only hands you need are those applauding your poetry. ;-)
Turner Avatar
January 28, 2025 at 7:36 AM
Thank you my dear friend. None of it would be possible without the support of more talented people like you who always encourage with kindness and are always willing to lend a hand:)
Pigeon Tart Avatar
January 28, 2025 at 6:43 AM
Beautiful piece Daniel. xomo
Turner Avatar
January 28, 2025 at 7:01 AM
Thank you, Mo. I appreciate your time and support. How's life been treating you? I hope all is well with you and yours.
Hughes Avatar
January 28, 2025 at 5:36 AM
Well done Daniel, it flows so nicely! Hope all is well with you.
Turner Avatar
January 28, 2025 at 7:00 AM
Hello Mark. Great to see you again. Yes by the grace of God Im still kicking. Thanks for dropping in. I hope life is treating you kindly, as well.
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