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death is near- a fading out tomorrow will never be- gone away an empty shell will dwell birds and butterflies come fluttering on gossamer silky wings wings soft as a spider web and the curtains stir in the open window death comes like a bird of prey drifting silently and hummingbirds hover in heavenly harmony her hair streaming down her shoulders the clock of time stops the end has come deep blue is the sky beyond this realm birds and butterflies come fluttering on gossamer silky wings and hummingbirds hover in heavenly harmony blue birds are twittering in the trees she breathes a long breath pauses and then the moment of death a heaviness descends death comes like a bird of prey drifting silently she hangs her head like a dead flower the mind dies a peacefulness a light that fills the room her spirit leaving and on the bedside a beautiful bouquet of red roses dulcet full of scent oh her life was fleeting infused with happiness beauty laughter the dream has ended the final curtain has dropped farewell my beauty I kiss her lips her still warm hand outside a gentle rain has begun falling on the weeping willow tree my weeping tears dropping soaking her blanket ___________________________ June 26, 2015 Free Verse/"death of a friend" Copyright Protected, ID 684720 Submitted to the contest, Any Poem You Are Proud Of Sponsor, Mystic Rose Second Place I am proud of this poem because I wrote right after the death of my friend, she died of cancer and I was with her at the end witnessing it through the eyes of a poet. It is my most viewed poem and I was able to capture the style of E.E. Cummings perfectly in my opinion. __________________________ Submitted to the contest, A poem You Are Proud Of #3 sponsor, Skat Fifth Place _____________________________ Submitted to the contest, Death and Dying sponsor, Debbie Guzzi Second Place

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Date: 12/11/2021 1:25:00 PM
Oh Constance ~ I just found this poem. It is so beautiful and haunting. I'm glad you were with your friend when she died. It's a beautiful gift to hold one's hand when they leave, as I did with my husband. I think it gives them strength for their journey. Take care, Ann
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Constance La France
Date: 12/11/2021 2:01:00 PM
Ann, so happy you found this poem because I get to read it again too, and I still love it. Thank you so much for the compliment, when we love someone we do not want to be anywhere else ~ love and serenity _Constance
Date: 5/16/2020 4:13:00 PM
Hi Constance, reading your POTD today, I was reminded of this tender poem, one of my faves. Reading it gives me a sense of peace...xx Rhonda
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Constance La France
Date: 5/17/2020 9:48:00 AM
Rhonda, thanks for visiting this old poem of mine, at the time I was experimenting with the style of EE Cummings and the theme was real, I watched my friend die and the poet in me captured it _Constance
Date: 11/17/2018 1:18:00 AM
"Death comes like a bird of prey, drifting silently..." Indeed. I enjoy your work.
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Date: 2/20/2018 5:23:00 PM
this is such a beautiful read Constance, the clock of time stops... i too stood beside my father as he died of cancer and it was as simple and profound as your words say, beautiful
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Date: 10/31/2016 11:54:00 AM
I love the license you have taken with line length, word placement etc. so creative yet so natural. One of the best I've read on death and dying. So happy to have met u through your poetry Blessings, Kathy
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Date: 5/23/2016 4:47:00 AM
I really loved this one and the presentation of the piece is amazing also! Congrats on your placement
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Date: 5/23/2016 12:33:00 AM
Broken, Congratulations and thank you for sharing a poem you are proud of. Stop by my latest blog "Innocent of All" and enjoy the warm smile. :) **SKAT**
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Date: 6/30/2015 11:53:00 PM
Broken, :) Congratulations on your win. SKAT LOVE
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Date: 6/30/2015 9:42:00 AM
Broken WIngs, I can relate to tis as I've lost a good friend! sad and really love the format!BIG CONGRATULATIONS!~Olive Eloisa..
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Date: 6/30/2015 9:38:00 AM
Pretty good. Any one can relate to this. My Congrats.
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Date: 6/30/2015 9:26:00 AM
I love this unique style of writing, which captivates and brings more sensitivity to the depth and sad subject. Beautifully written, Constance! Honored to share this spot with you !
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Date: 6/30/2015 4:15:00 AM
The structure is lovely, BW, almost as if the narrator is gasping and catching her breath through tears to tell it, moments after it happened. You really do this very well, and a winner from me. Viv x
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Date: 6/30/2015 3:13:00 AM
Just wonderful Constance...The repetition throughout makes it all the more compelling...I agree with Rhonda's comment, yet it we who are left behind that grieve as your last verse states so eloquently...
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Date: 6/28/2015 6:26:00 PM
Hello Broken Wings Wow you are not the average poet you are a special talent who can certainly write or has studied writing. Loved this poem and hope you will read some of my work and please critique. Cheers Love Chris
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Date: 6/28/2015 2:01:00 PM
tears not years (darn autocorrect!)
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Date: 6/28/2015 1:59:00 PM
Wow, this is amazing, Constance! I thought it was going to be a sad, morbid poem about death, but this is far from it! It's beautiful and peaceful, love through years! A Fav! Hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 6/26/2015 9:33:00 PM
Constance, this is amazing! The format is eye-catching and the imagery beautiful! I love this! Best wishes in the contest! Love, Kim
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