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Death Dream

When you die in a dream it goes something like this: Life goes "right" Your wife holds up the baby, says: "Look there, Daddy loves you" You cringe but know it's true Then, you grow old They lead you around by the arm Place you alone at a table You came here once--when you were able You grow older quickly, and have dreams "That's not who I am!" you say to yourself Swipe, kick. Get that ugly wrinkled mask off my face! It comes off--ghastly worms behind it You've spawned, grown old, died Falling away from the empty shell, arms flail Shaking off disgusting dregs of rotten flesh Too long inhabited You are now descending "Hey! Shouldn't I be Ascending . . . ?"

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Date: 7/20/2021 5:09:00 PM
oh my, that ending!!! Let's hope the spirit ascends at least. I enjoyed this poem.
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Dalton Moss
Date: 8/10/2021 6:20:00 PM
Thanks Andrea. It just did not get any better for that man.
Date: 3/30/2021 4:38:00 PM
Hi Dalton, this is very vivid, especially the wrinkled mask and the worms behind it, and a very wry touch on the closing lines~
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Dalton Moss
Date: 3/30/2021 6:03:00 PM
Thank you Michelle :) Even I do not know where that came from, but I'm glad it was only a dream!

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