Death Concedes

Thus do I clutch the water surface fading
cold sun in mocking hide behind the trees
while weariness implores - give up, surrender
as I refuse to fall down on my knees

life becomes the scoundrel of the moment
clawing at the hope there’s something there
an emptiness consumes and then fulfills me
releasing all the torment that I bear

so do the depths grow darker in this coldness
this crushing fear that there is nothing more
yet I struggle vainly for redemption
without the help of gods I still deplore

as Death concedes to dawn’s sober awak’ning
a light that spares the life that It was taking

John G. Lawless
©8/14/2022
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Buhagiar Avatar
August 14, 2022 at 11:26 PM
Are we afraid of death or not? I dare not think about it.
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