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Death By Any Other Name

Your soul left your eyes as you laid there and died on that dirty Iranian street They hovered o’er you – to shield; cover you but you took your last breath at their feet The blood ran so dark from beneath your headscarf as your mother took hold of your hand She rocked to and fro and cried - even though you were already dead in the sand You’d made your voice strong as you chanted your song before bullets tore into the crowd I couldn’t comprehend what your cause was … and then (they covered your face with a shroud) Whether wrong or be right; whatever the fight no matter the country or name This we ALL understand that it favors no man universally , DEATH is the same

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 4/8/2017 11:58:00 AM
Hello Gayle. You have stated your message and issue with elegance and grace. The expression is gentle yet strong enough to be heard and should be heard. Be proud of your execution. Well done entirely.
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Gayle Rodd
Date: 4/8/2017 1:48:00 PM
Thanks Lisa. I really wanted to sum it up at the end but didn't have enough stanza space. I hope the message was expressed despite the containment I had.
Date: 4/7/2017 11:12:00 PM
You brought a very sad dramatic scene from the real world into our field of vision thanks to your powerful words . . . and the images stay with us. Amitiés
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Gayle Rodd
Date: 4/8/2017 9:03:00 AM
Thank you so much
Date: 4/7/2017 12:41:00 PM
A poem straight out of the headlines and just as sad. You final line says it all Gayle. Nicely done, a deep and affecting piece of writing.
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Gayle Rodd
Date: 4/7/2017 8:42:00 PM
Based on a viral video, burned into my memory. Very sad indeed.
Date: 4/7/2017 11:08:00 AM
Potent perfect write Gayle. 7. xomo
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Gayle Rodd
Date: 4/7/2017 8:41:00 PM
Thank you Maureen! xoxox

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