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Death Blows a Fiery Horn

In a chariot of fire in the sun
  blew a pale horse and pale rider’s last breath,
and on your grave sings a haunting raven
  in the shadows of the valley of death.

Between trembling leaf and pohutukawa
  the undertaker’s men stood grave and bier,
and brave stoic life filled the living hour
  forevermore a day, a week, a year.

These time echoes rise up from its bones,
  and that lone raven's song on pit row
pipes through the rushes beyond the tombstones
  where time cut short above stood still below.
Yet I fear death itself I shall not mourn
  when its flame bearer blows its fiery horn.

But far more does sound a haunting in me
  as if your faint voice my ear passing through -
and I trapped betwixt next world and earthly
  sit this day communing with God and you.

Today I upon this ploughed earth sullen gaze
  and hearken in the blooms the winds of death!
Its cold foul blow that bodes ill all my days 
  dares to breathe on me its cankered breath.

These time whispers rise up from its bones,
  and that lone raven's song on pit row
pipes through the rushes beyond the tombstones
  where time cut short above stood still below.
Yet I fear death itself I shall not mourn
  when its flame bearer blows its fiery horn.


                 Written: July 1995
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Woods Avatar
August 1, 2024 at 12:30 PM
This is extremely great writing imo Keith! I'm super impressed and absolutely love this prophetic poem!!! I'm faving it! Xoxo
Woods Avatar
August 2, 2024 at 8:41 AM
Lol ;)
Trestrail Avatar
August 2, 2024 at 3:18 AM
Thanks Crystol. I’m super impressed and absolutely love your comment. I’m faving it!
Greenhough Avatar
July 19, 2024 at 8:23 AM
I like this outlook on death that has a predetermined message. The flow of words and story give resounding gravity. Thanks for such a gem.
Trestrail Avatar
July 19, 2024 at 4:34 PM
Hilda, if you keep this up I’m going to have to give you a resounding hug. Thanks for visiting.
Wolf Avatar
July 18, 2024 at 7:27 PM
Love the fearlessness, Keith. Faith and Strength, Gershon
Trestrail Avatar
July 19, 2024 at 4:20 AM
Just like Israel. Thanks Gershon. Cheers.
Kauffman Avatar
July 18, 2024 at 12:46 PM
Hi Keith! How did I miss your new postings? So glad to know you are posting again! These words have the elegance of poetic artistry and the eloquence of faith. Love the last line! Sending blessings to you!
Trestrail Avatar
July 19, 2024 at 4:19 AM
I’ve never been afraid of death, just dying. Thanks for stopping by. Blessings to you too.
Lawless Avatar
July 18, 2024 at 4:16 AM
a darkly solemn right Keith
Trestrail Avatar
July 18, 2024 at 4:25 AM
Cheers John. Hope all is well.
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