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Death and Life

Death and Life When shall we understand That it is not death We struggle against But this thing we call life Life Life which does not comprehend The magnitude of its being Made small by the conception Of living, breathing, heart beating, blood flowing Ends In death Death Is The eternal life Life Bound by our human concept Our tiny mind of propensity To worldly goods And Earth ridden need Does not feel the stars universal Or creation beheld But existent undeniable it is There Floating eternity above our heads Life Denies the stars Turns its eye to ridicule amongst the suns And exchanges them for small planetary money Swaps it for political ideals And economies And religious deals and books Of explanatory And all with these to give to their excuse Of their complication Of death Explain How Have you lived ? If defined by love If defined by hatred Conceive nothing more Than Just is Death And Life That which We struggle against Is nothing But life To which we cling So desperate While the eternal Breathes There Above Our Heads ( it is our own fear that stops us from reaching and touching the stars )

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/11/2009 11:06:00 AM
hey man that was cool and long.but worth reading in the end!!!!i love it!!!!!wonderful work colin...:-)keep it up!!!!!
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Date: 4/3/2009 10:07:00 AM
the truth thats it....wonderful...
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Date: 4/2/2009 5:48:00 PM
I'm in your corner with this one. I really like how you have it formatted, each word seems so much more intense. "Made small by conception" you went deep on this one.
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Date: 3/30/2009 12:52:00 PM
I must agree with you. Beautiful write. Hope to touch those stars one of these days. Love, Shar
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Date: 3/30/2009 9:15:00 AM
So you posted some work on Sunday? good writes as usual..tugging at the heart..your pen is filled with great insight.....thanks for the awesome comments..made me laugh on a slow Monday.
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Date: 3/30/2009 1:25:00 AM
Awefullly good write, a soaring metaphorical, a powerful teaching ... I love the lessons and the structure, God bless you
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