Death

death is the closing door of thought,
threshold of serenity
the soulful paths of cordiality 
it is perfected for unerred sorrows
the conclusion of life 
at uninviting time
the flickering hopes of cause
the cause of fingers rising eventyally from ****
the cause of having hands shoved back in deep muck
the dimming flame of candles the blown out storm
the saddening peace of perishing dreams.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Ajmal Avatar
June 7, 2017 at 9:45 AM
A very beautiful written poem, everyone in this workd has to die one day or another, but the death of someone is never a pleasant scene however I m new on this site and would really appreciate if you could find time to read my poems and give your honest reviews about them and i m also a 15 years old child from pakistan
Tasneem Avatar
June 7, 2017 at 10:28 AM
thnku Faraz i would love to check oit ur poems and comment on them
White Avatar
June 4, 2017 at 3:11 PM
That is a very poetic list of what Death is indeed. Nice imagery in your words. Welcome to PoetrySoup.
Tasneem Avatar
June 5, 2017 at 3:05 AM
thnku for taking the time out means alot
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