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Grim reaper stock illustration. Illustration of mysterious - 57672306

It fills the vial, life, quite thick as blood And presses like a levee 'neath a flood The hammer, down ... It trembles in the dark, a wage of want A seraphim without the wings to flaunt The crooked clown ... It screams the horrid silence as a beast To seed the dim damnation for its feast The frightened frown. Written and submitted on June 10, 2020 For the "Triple Stanza Couplet Tail-Rhyme" Poetry Contest Charles Messina, Judge & Sponsor.

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Aditi Mishra

Date: 7/5/2020 3:48:00 PM

A dark yet powerful muse from your pen with mystifying sprinkles. Congratulations on your win Greg! Blessings :)

Anisha Dutta

Date: 7/4/2020 7:34:00 AM

BIG CONGRATS to win TOP. Perfect poetic approach.

John Watt

Date: 7/2/2020 12:09:00 PM

Your poetic talents are once again win-worthy, with this fine #1 commentary on the grim reaper. Loved the write. Nice image, too. You always come up with such great ones. Congrats, my friend.

D.W. Rodgers

Date: 7/2/2020 10:36:00 AM

Cograts n your win. And unfortunately your subject matter is so apt in the year of the plague.

Eve Roper

Date: 7/2/2020 9:25:00 AM

Love the verse, Greg, congratulations on your win.

charles messina

Date: 7/2/2020 5:28:00 AM

Greg, Another Gem from your brilliant pen. Congratulations on your 1st place win! Blessings.. Charlie

Beth Evans

Date: 7/2/2020 5:07:00 AM

A beautiful poem, Gregory, congratulations.

John Watt

Date: 6/10/2020 7:10:00 PM

I see you are wearing your Edgar Allen Barden cap today... a very "Poe-tic" take on the grim reaper... should rise to the top of the tail-rhyme contest. Like Robert I do so admire and envy your poetic talents, my friend.

Gregory R Barden
Date: 6/12/2020 1:42:00 AM

You are far too kind, John, though I so appreciate your wonderfully thoughtful and kind comments! Blessings and best wishes always, my good friend! :o)

Robert Lindley

Date: 6/10/2020 10:09:00 AM

This is truly an awesome piece my friend. I admire greatly and do so envy such immense poetic talent. A FAV..

Gregory R Barden
Date: 6/12/2020 1:41:00 AM

You are very kind, Sir Roberto, and the admiration goes both ways, Brother. Blessings! :o)

John Hamilton

Date: 6/10/2020 7:30:00 AM

This is a dark write, but I love it! It has a poe-like feel to it, sure to be a hit with the sponsor!

Gregory R Barden
Date: 6/12/2020 1:41:00 AM

Many kind thanks, John, it's been a while since I did any seriously dark writes ... I do so love the genre. Blessings, Bud! :o)

MAHTAB BANGALEE

Date: 6/10/2020 5:39:00 AM

superb poem penned for the "Triple Stanza Couplet Tail-Rhyme" Poetry Contest.....greatly I enjoyed the theme about death

Gregory R Barden
Date: 6/12/2020 1:40:00 AM

Many kind thanks to you, Mahtab - I'm so pleased you liked my poem ... this one is special to me, and I appreciate the wonderful comments, and your taking the time. Blessings to you, My Friend! :o)