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Death, Where Are You

We are made of adenine, But my soul is made of kerosene, And life is my amphetamine, Death, where are you My body is half H20, But my soul burns in the adagio, Of a forsaken maestro, Death, where are you Though, on the high of cigarettes, My breathless lungs will bear regrets, The echoes of my youth’s musette, Death, where are you If we’re talking chemically, Then emotions were my ecstasy, And death, it is my destiny, Death, where are you April 30th, 2018 Contest: Rhyme and Refrain Sponsor: Broken Wings

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Date: 6/2/2018 6:41:00 PM
Congrats on your fine win, Rainy Sky.
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Date: 5/19/2018 8:40:00 AM
Unique interpretation of the theme. It seems as if you are describing an illness.
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Date: 5/15/2018 2:47:00 PM
Rainy, congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderful poem ~
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Date: 5/14/2018 4:37:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement with this powerful poetry... and refrain. Well-done!
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Date: 5/1/2018 7:08:00 AM
Nice cadence; I had no idea what rhyme refrain was until I read your poem. Good luck in the contest Rainy.
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Rainy Sky
Date: 5/2/2018 2:56:00 PM
Thanks! Glad you know what it is now- I had no idea what it was before I read the contest description :)
Date: 4/30/2018 12:54:00 PM
Interesting take on the theme, well done. good luck in the contest
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Rainy Sky
Date: 5/1/2018 4:45:00 AM
Thanks, you too ;)

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