Death, Where Are You

We are made of adenine,
But my soul is made of kerosene,
And life is my amphetamine,
                    Death, where are you

My body is half H20,
But my soul burns in the adagio,
Of a forsaken maestro,
                    Death, where are you

Though, on the high of cigarettes,
My breathless lungs will bear regrets,
The echoes of my youth’s musette,
                    Death, where are you

If we’re talking chemically,
Then emotions were my ecstasy,
And death, it is my destiny,
                    Death, where are you


April 30th, 2018
Contest: Rhyme and Refrain
Sponsor: Broken Wings
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gauthier Avatar
June 2, 2018 at 6:41 PM
Congrats on your fine win, Rainy Sky.
Inman Avatar
May 19, 2018 at 8:40 AM
Unique interpretation of the theme. It seems as if you are describing an illness.
La France Avatar
May 15, 2018 at 2:47 PM
Rainy, congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderful poem ~
Gentry Avatar
May 14, 2018 at 4:37 PM
Congratulations on your placement with this powerful poetry... and refrain. Well-done!
Krutsinger Avatar
May 1, 2018 at 7:08 AM
Nice cadence; I had no idea what rhyme refrain was until I read your poem. Good luck in the contest Rainy.
Sky Avatar
May 2, 2018 at 2:56 PM
Thanks! Glad you know what it is now- I had no idea what it was before I read the contest description :)
Lawless Avatar
April 30, 2018 at 12:54 PM
Interesting take on the theme, well done. good luck in the contest
Sky Avatar
May 1, 2018 at 4:45 AM
Thanks, you too ;)
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