Dear Old Friends Who Came To See the Lake

Hello, dear friends, it’s good to have you here.
It’s dark out still! You came before the dawn!
You say you want to go down to the pier?
First let me go and put the kettle on.

Okay, I should have known your fondest wish
would be to see the lake. Let’s sit and chat.
You say you cannot wait to go and fish?
First taste this brand new tea. I got it at
the one new shop in town. It’s been so long
I guess you have not even heard about
our tourist trade. My gosh, it’s gone all wrong.
You did not hear about our horrid drought?

The lake, of which I know you were so fond,
is nothing now since it became a pond!

Feb. 25, 2018 for Nayda Ivette Negron's  "Kettle, Pond, Lake" Contest
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Gauthier Avatar
June 2, 2018 at 8:16 PM
Back with congrats, Andrea.
Sinha-Roy Avatar
May 20, 2018 at 4:59 AM
Congratulations, Andrea on your win.Very cute approach to the theme, indeed.
Gentry Avatar
May 19, 2018 at 4:46 AM
Congratulations on your win. Your tske on this contest is unique, realistic and well done.
Godwin Avatar
May 18, 2018 at 5:44 AM
Right behind you on the podium - what a great place to be. Delighted she finalized the contest and wanted to congratulate you! Hope you are having a grand kind of a Friday. Love ... CayCay
Sinha-Roy Avatar
May 18, 2018 at 1:57 AM
Congratulations, Andrea on your win. Wonderful poetic narrative.
De Beaulieu Avatar
February 26, 2018 at 7:17 PM
Hello Andrea, a lake became a pond! Wow! Clever! have a nice evening my friend.
Horne Avatar
February 26, 2018 at 3:36 PM
very clever & thought provoking, my friend x
Murray Avatar
February 26, 2018 at 11:33 AM
We are like the fish that now must be out of water, both rushing to fill that kettle Andrea. I would never refuse a nice cup of tea. That's the Irish in me.
One Avatar
February 26, 2018 at 10:03 AM
Lol at the end, great idea for a sonnet...
Scars Avatar
February 26, 2018 at 7:52 AM
cure and clever sweet lady! Good luck! ;) -luloo
Gupta Avatar
February 26, 2018 at 6:10 AM
The lovely lake and pond ... and lovelier the suggestion beyond ... a winning entry Andrea ...
Warlov Avatar
February 25, 2018 at 9:58 PM
something to ponder.
Canerdy Avatar
February 25, 2018 at 7:58 PM
This is SO well-written and moving. The way you worked in "pond" and "lake" is impressive, Andrea! Janice
Cunningham Avatar
February 25, 2018 at 5:55 PM
Such devastation a drought can cause, affecting tourism and peoples livelihoods. Lovely verse Andrea. Good luck in the contest. Tom
Barry-Nishanian Avatar
February 25, 2018 at 5:42 PM
Enjoyed...leaving to read more. bbn
Michael Avatar
February 25, 2018 at 5:12 PM
A very entertaining poem...in a natural voice...Enjoyed it
Pandit Avatar
February 25, 2018 at 4:31 PM
Lovely turn in the end..enjoyed reading your poem, Andrea..best for a win.
Bauer Avatar
February 25, 2018 at 4:29 PM
you've used thesse words in such a clever way, andrea! kudos to you and best of luck in the contest...
Cozart Avatar
February 25, 2018 at 3:21 PM
I love this. What a beautiful story. Here in Calif., I can totally relate. I can hear the yearning for company in her voice.
Rodrigues Avatar
February 25, 2018 at 1:07 PM
I like your segue from lake to pond! We’ve gone from pond to lake :)
Gauthier Avatar
February 25, 2018 at 12:22 PM
So much for that speed boat ride! Fun take on the theme, Andrea. Well done.
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