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Dear Mr Moon

~o~ Dear Mr. Moon, Please let me see your wondrous light wash over me And take this love I hold inside spread it across your evening sky Then let it flow to every star glistening bright so very far In hopes that she will feel it too when her eyes gaze this night on you For she is who my heart does miss, please Mr. Moon Sincerely, Chris

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Michael Whatley

Date: 9/5/2019 9:20:00 AM

Wonderful rhythmic piece, Chris. I particularly like how you added a rhyme with your name at the end!

Chris Green
Date: 9/5/2019 9:32:00 AM

Thanks so much Michael. I am thrilled you enjoyed this

Gershon Wolf

Date: 9/4/2019 6:55:00 PM

You make the simplest stuff fairly sing, Chris. So rhythmical and wondrous. Best wishes, Gershon

Chris Green
Date: 9/5/2019 6:56:00 AM

Happy you liked this one Gershon

John Hamilton

Date: 9/4/2019 6:33:00 PM

There you go with another classic romantic write...you're still the romantic king of poetry, long may you reign!

Chris Green
Date: 9/5/2019 6:56:00 AM

Thanks my friend. You humble me with your comment

Ann Foster

Date: 9/4/2019 1:09:00 PM

Oh my... how sweet, how sad and lovely, how lonely, what a tribute to beauty. Elegant. Ann

Chris Green
Date: 9/4/2019 1:55:00 PM

Thank you my friend. :)

Brenda Chiri

Date: 9/4/2019 12:05:00 PM

Chris this was truly amazing! I love it! Well you know me I have a thing for night skies! I do spend so much time gazing! Simply beautiful!;)

Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/5/2019 1:21:00 AM

Haha! Ok yea right you have that title and throne! I am but a pheasant to you!;)

Chris Green
Date: 9/4/2019 12:11:00 PM

Thank you Brenda, coming from one of the best romantic poets on this site, that means a lot to me.

Hello There

Date: 9/4/2019 11:56:00 AM

I can relate to this wish upon the moon... Love the last stanza :)

Chris Green
Date: 9/4/2019 12:00:00 PM

Thanks, it was a fun one to write. I'm glad you liked it.

Elizabeth Kinch

Date: 9/4/2019 1:48:00 AM

Clever and cute, hope she feels your love.

Chris Green
Date: 9/4/2019 7:02:00 AM

Thank you so very much Elizabeth

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/3/2019 9:14:00 PM

Let the moon do your bidding...light up her eyes. Nice...moony-eyed

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/4/2019 8:25:00 AM

Love that, Chris! <3 :)

Chris Green
Date: 9/4/2019 7:02:00 AM

yeah, I just figured it was hanging up there all alone so I decided to give it something to do. : ) Thank you Kim

Sandra Adams

Date: 9/3/2019 6:37:00 PM

see, now how romantic is this one, to wish on moonbeams to reflect the twinkle in your eyes to hers....i hope she feels it too...another great write :) hugs

Chris Green
Date: 9/4/2019 7:01:00 AM

Thank you Sandy for always being so kind to me

Heidi Sands

Date: 9/3/2019 6:15:00 PM

This is special Chris. I hope she feels it too :)

Chris Green
Date: 9/4/2019 7:01:00 AM

Thank you so much Heidi.