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Beautiful Mother Daughter Quotes Expressing Unconditional Love

Dear Mother

 
Dear mother, I have not come for awhile, and got lost in the rows searching for you; and can sense your laugh and smile ! Things I must tell- are long due; let's read my letter under a sky blue ! I want to thank you for being the best, because growing up I was often bad; I was truly a girl blessed ! But, you said words too when mad; and being confused . . . that just made me sad ! We hold a special true bond together, I lost a sister and you lost a child; when Sue left like a feather ! (I was quiet ... she was wild;) but, her death we have never reconciled ! And in my darkest days you held my hand, death of my love . . . baby . . . left me ice-cold: with me- you would always stand ! (Oh, why is there fungus mold!) Mother, I thank- love you a millionfold ! _________________________ April 18, 2023 Poetry/Quintain (English)/Dear Mother Copyright Protected, ID 04-1541-289-18 All Rights Reserved, 2023, Constance La France Written for the Standard contest, Letter to My Mother sponsor, Anoucheka Gangabissoon, Judged 05/16/2023 Third Place
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Date: 5/16/2023 7:18:00 PM
"her death we have never reconciled" - It's the case with the death of a mother more than the death of anybody else. Beautifully written. Congratulations!
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Constance La France
Date: 5/16/2023 7:47:00 PM
Christuraj, thank you so much for the comment, compassion, compliment and congratulations, appreciate !
Date: 4/19/2023 11:26:00 PM
Very touching piece, Constance, your wonderful mother stood by you at all times and this poem is a great tribute to her:)
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Constance La France
Date: 4/20/2023 7:02:00 AM
Jo, thank you so much for the compliment and nice comment, yes, she did !
Date: 4/19/2023 8:41:00 PM
A mother is the only one who will stay with us through thick and thin. Even if the whole world deserts us, she will be there for us. I am touched by your loving sentiments for your mother dear Constance. All the Best!
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Constance La France
Date: 4/20/2023 7:03:00 AM
Valsa, thank you so much for the lovely comment and compliment !
Date: 4/19/2023 7:39:00 AM
Hi Constance,This is very touching and heartfelt as I lost my Mom too, she was the only one who ever stood for me so I can truly relate. Well penned.Blessings Carl
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Constance La France
Date: 4/19/2023 1:29:00 PM
Carl, thank you so much for the compliment, comment, compassion and understanding, I never imagined that I would miss my mom so much, !
Date: 4/18/2023 5:40:00 PM
So poignant and lovely, Constance. Best of luck!
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Constance La France
Date: 4/19/2023 1:30:00 PM
Ann, thank you so much for the compliment and encouragement !
Date: 4/18/2023 5:35:00 PM
A truly poignant letter to your Mom, Constance. No one else can give the same love and support as a mother can, even in the darkest days! Love and hugs, My Dear Friend ~ Mala
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Constance La France
Date: 4/19/2023 1:30:00 PM
Mala, thank you so much for the comment, compliment, love and hugs !
Date: 4/18/2023 3:26:00 PM
A heartfelt piece from deep inside you Constance.' Good to read be encouraged For there is no, temptation that that has Seized that is not common to humans But God extends His Grace to us in Jesus Be blessed Constance in Jesus name.'
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Date: 4/19/2023 1:31:00 PM
Joe, thank you so much for the compliment and nice comment !
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