I Often Wonder

You first held my hand in rapture sown, soft-honed land.
Time rose our teen romantic throes through joy-spiced air.
When our lips met with eager flair by an aloof stream's stare,
we lost focus under starry skies devoted to our sighs.
Time hasn't frayed my feelings from our love's ballet in twilight rays ...

I often wonder if you also remember and hold this time as tender.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018


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Date: 7/9/2018 12:45:00 AM
Very steamy, CayCay. You're such a naughty girl. lol Extremely well written sweetie. I see kudos are in order. Well done!
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Date: 7/7/2018 1:44:00 AM
So brief yet lasting. Epic
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Date: 7/1/2018 2:31:00 PM
NOw I am SURE that one was for a special person! Beautiful, Caycay. Which contest was it in? Congrats I see. And well deserved!
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Date: 6/24/2018 6:11:00 PM
Congratulations on your very well deserved win, CayCay !!! Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 6/24/2018 12:38:00 AM
Well done, CayCay, excellent piece and very worthy of the win! Viv x
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Date: 6/23/2018 10:03:00 AM
You sent depths of past romance into this old soul with this beautiful and so finely weaved tapestry of poetic words my friend. Closing verse is inspiring and immense powerful in its light and truth.. A fav!!!
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Date: 6/21/2018 4:54:00 PM
Congratulations on your top win with this well-written romantic poem, all in five lines. Amazing!
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Date: 6/20/2018 4:26:00 PM
beautiful poetry, congrats on win,
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Date: 6/20/2018 1:23:00 PM
Wow, wow, WOW CayCay! This poem is so incredible! I see why it is at the top of the winner's list. It is going into my Faves my friend. It is one of your best! Congratulations on your deserving win! xxoo
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Date: 6/19/2018 3:15:00 PM
Way to go, my lady. You are on a roll!!! congrats on top win.
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Date: 6/19/2018 11:48:00 AM
Sweetly done, well deserved win!
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Date: 6/18/2018 2:00:00 PM
Congratulations on your top win, Cay Cay! Hugs, Carolyn
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Date: 6/18/2018 8:51:00 AM
Back with congrats! Yay :) xomo!
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Date: 6/17/2018 12:39:00 PM
- Top win !!! - I visit your poem CayCay, with congratulations and a hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/17/2018 11:05:00 AM
Congratulations CayCay, Tom.
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Date: 6/17/2018 10:27:00 AM
Lovely! Congrats on first place! ...joy-spiced air and starry skies!
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Date: 6/17/2018 9:26:00 AM
Congratulations CayCay on your podium write:)
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Date: 6/17/2018 8:10:00 AM
Congrats!!! Cay Cay...lovely verse...love & light...^WW^
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Date: 6/17/2018 6:56:00 AM
Congratulations for your top win CayCay :)
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Date: 6/17/2018 6:39:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win CayCay, beautiful poetry, a joy to read. :))
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Date: 6/17/2018 6:09:00 AM
Wow... You described this beautiful moment so poetically CayCay... And only in 5 lines... Congratulations on your first place in the contest..
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Date: 6/16/2018 1:50:00 PM
"Your lips brushed my lips in a young dare" love that line CayCay, and your whole poem as well. Nicely penned my friend. John
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Date: 6/16/2018 1:16:00 PM
So many couples fail to make it through the "passing years," but when they do, how wonderful it is to recall those first moments of attraction. A lovely poem, CayCay! Hugs, Carolyn
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Date: 6/16/2018 10:48:00 AM
Oh so rich and eloquent! Stunning piece CayCay! Already a winner with me :) good luck in the contest! xomo
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Date: 6/16/2018 10:43:00 AM
Lovely romantic five liner CayCay, good luck. Tom
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