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Dear Heart

Dear Heart, Just a note to say........ When I was only three my puppy died, but you kept beating just for me. When I was only sixteen that boy broke my heart, but you saved me. When I was twenty-five my dad died, but you rescued me. Dear heart you have been here through thick and thin, loving me each day I have taken a breath. I want to say thank you, you are my very best friend. Date Written: 1/28/2023

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Fj Thomas

Date: 2/1/2023 3:22:00 PM

I like this Paula. I often view mine as fragmented, tattered from years of abuse. But as you have so beautifully said, it still beats for me :) ...lovely

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/2/2023 10:14:00 AM

Thank You, for your note. Glad you like my Heart write. Many hearts get fragmented/tattered from years of life/living. People can bring so much hurt/pain to others. Heart keep on beating so we can give out love. Thank You. Have a blessed day...............

Paul Bell

Date: 1/31/2023 3:37:00 AM

I actually think we don't say this often enough to our little heart. It sure does do a great job, especially getting me up the big hill.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/31/2023 11:42:00 AM

Thank You, for your note. Glad you enjoyed this write. Yes, we need to tell our heart, Thank You. Have a blessed day...............

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/29/2023 9:09:00 AM

this is SO sweet. Love the innocence

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/29/2023 3:43:00 PM

Thank You, for your note. Glad you like this one. Have a blessed day...............

Valsa George

Date: 1/28/2023 11:27:00 PM

We never think to thank our heart for beating in thick and thin. Our entire life revolves around the heart. If it stops, our life too stops . Well done Paula. All the Best in the contest.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/29/2023 3:42:00 PM

Thank You, for your note and for your best. So true when you say, "If it stops, our life too stops." Have a blessed day...............

Sotto Poet

Date: 1/28/2023 12:30:00 PM

When we're content, life is glorious. Your feelings are quite beautiful. Paula, it was a very uplifting and motivating poem

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/28/2023 1:21:00 PM

Thank You, for your note. Glad you found this one very uplifting and motivating. Have a blessed weekend...............