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Dear God of Love

Dear God Of Love: Here I sit waiting to hear from you. I just poured out my heart now I need a clue A man of my dreams that will make us two. I am waiting to hear back with your breakthrough. I know you are very busy but please do not fall through. I need to know what you are going to do. Many frogs I have kissed that made me blue. Please send me a real live prince not a jar of glue. Here I sit waiting to hear from you. Why are you taking so long boo hoo. Soon I will be too old for love that is true. Date Written: 7/3/2020 3 Place July NA or HM Contest Judged: 7/29/2020 Sponsored by: Constance La France A Contest About a Goddess or God - Not THE God Poetry Contest Poetry Contest Deadline: Thursday, July 30, 2020

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Aditi Mishra

Date: 8/1/2020 11:02:00 PM

Loved your honest note to God. I remember when I had made a list of traits I'd want in my prince for fun. Later that list got washed away and I'd forgotten about it. Incidentally my husband has none of the traits from that list and now we laugh about it. Love appears in unexpected ways they say. Congratulations on your win Paula :)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/3/2020 9:22:00 AM

Thank You, for reading, writing and your congratulations. Glad you like it. Writing a note can be helpful. You are so right when you say, "Love appears in unexpected ways they say." Enjoy your day with a hug...................

Constance La France

Date: 7/29/2020 7:15:00 PM

Paula, congratulations on your win in my NA/HM contest _Constance

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/30/2020 7:54:00 AM

Thank You, for your note and your congratulations. I am honored with the win. Have a wonderful day.............

John Watt

Date: 7/15/2020 11:50:00 AM

Loved the line about the jar of glue. Most days I feel I am closer to that than a prince. Enjoyed your fun letter to God, Paula. Have a great day ~ John

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/15/2020 3:05:00 PM

Thank You, for your note. So glad you loved the line. It was cute/fun to write. Enjoy your day ..................

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 7/3/2020 9:58:00 PM

My sister wrote down everything she wanted in a man, put it under her pillow and prayed about it. She found him forty days later. They have been happily married for sixteen years. I hope faith brings the right man to you my friend.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/14/2020 10:49:00 AM

Thank You, for your note. Your sister had a great idea. Glad you like it. It was fun to write. Have a wonderful day ...................

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/3/2020 4:11:00 PM

- Hope the frog become your prince ... one never gets too old for love, Paula :) - A sweet poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/3/2020 5:21:00 PM

Thank You, for reading and writing. Glad you like it. It was fun to write. Have a wonderful day with hugs...................

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 7/3/2020 1:57:00 PM

Charming poem that can certainly turn a frog to a prince dearest, Paula. I am certain that no one is too old for love for love is immortal and comes from God who already has heard your prayer and soon would deliver your prince at your door! Have a wonderful weekend!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/3/2020 5:20:00 PM

Thank You, for reading and writing. Yes, no one is tooooo old for love. Have a wonderful day and weekend...................