Get Your Premium Membership

Dear Diary

Heat blast raging like fireworks building slow, exploding fast; They don't see eyes, just quirks; Harsh word shatter me like glass; Nothing but a ball to bounce, My spirit their favorite toy; Never letting up an ounce to see me cry brings them joy Without knowing what to do I am left hurt and fiery; Why can't they read all my clues? When will it end Diary?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 5/21/2014 7:20:00 PM
Agreed with Jerry, the last line needs tweaking but very good poem.
Login to Reply
Date: 5/21/2014 6:03:00 PM
I love this Melani, but you last line ?
Login to Reply

Book: Reflection on the Important Things