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Dead Winter

A black cloud discriminates effortlessly, forms gauche haunting images justifying Kraken legend. Malevolent nimbostratus orchestrate prejudice quotable rain squalls, travelling unbiased verifying what xtremes yonder zoom. © Harry J Horsman 2011

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Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/18/2012 1:48:00 PM

that x is a killer ..some say figure out the x & z first and then think of the write! Congrads on your win. Light & Love

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/16/2012 11:07:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Sidney~LeeAnn's "DEAD WINTER" contest Harry. Love, Carol

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 1/16/2012 2:02:00 AM

A great win Harry congratulations x

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/15/2012 10:42:00 PM

HARRY,, a wonderful win ;-) congratulations, on a poem well done,..always yours truly,..p.d.

Amber Chafer

Date: 12/14/2011 1:44:00 AM

Very nice poem, I love how you made it all work! Good luck with the contest!

Robert Pettit

Date: 12/11/2011 4:05:00 PM

ABC poems are not easy to write, but it appears you have done a wonderful job with this one.

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 12/10/2011 3:05:00 PM

How I love those terrifying storms when I'm tucked safely inside. You bring back some great memories of some I've seen. I wish you well in the contest Harry, too bad I'm not judging!

M.I.A .

Date: 12/9/2011 9:06:00 PM

you have a strong 'accent' that delivers a certain kind of appeal Harry. like... walking natures.. hmm, I'm not very good in first try but hopefully will get better as I read more. thanks for stopping by and your kind comments.

Jack Horne

Date: 12/9/2011 2:11:00 PM

Excellent ABC, Harry. I find these extremely difficult, but you've made it look so easy! Love it

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 12/8/2011 1:42:00 PM

This is such a cool ABC, Harry -- you did this wonderfully and cleverly --it honestly didn't occur to me that it was done in ABC-- I hope this places high! And thank you for dropping by my poems--- I have to agree with your wife, it is an art form! I believe some Japanese can even gift wrap without using tape ;) & I can imagine how thankful you all were when it rained during that time! :D

Sarah Seraphin

Date: 12/8/2011 11:01:00 AM

* "TIS SEEMS TO REPRESENT MUCH MORE THAN JUST THE WEATHER * MY DEAR PRECIOUS FRIEND * PERHAPS THE DARKER DOINGS BEHIND THE CURTAINS IN THIS WORLD * SUBLIMINAL * IGNORANT * BOLD * PUPPETS * VICTIMS * THIS THAT & PERHAPS EVERYTHING ELSE * THE LAB IN EVERS MAZE * BABYLON * VERY UNIQUE, PROFOUND & EXTREMELY WELL PRESENTED VISION * THANK YOU FOR YOUR KIND VISIT * HAPPY HOLIDAYS * MY LUV ALWAYS * SARAH." *