Dead Kept

A shopping cart adrift in the wind skies of angels
Hey man, he was shouting. Waving red chapped fists.
I’m a sinner now. In some areas
Started singing, his eyes glittering like the shaved moon.
Kept remembering the feeling in a way
Kept finding it hard, kept finding defeat,
wanting a way out
of our hometown.

I don’t really know
What happened.

Memorial of meth town, really reeling in the think how
Of chills and steeping in a lukewarm teacup of your death
Eerie, my brother. 
A week before Thursday talking in your sleep
Now. You’re going. Now, you’re going. But he’s already gone
Now the suit, like we’re all going to a party
A celebration of painful drink 
Spilling like ribbon, it is required. 
Pastel gloom of chalk-faced saints and 
clockwork Jesus 
Panting, his body mangled, forms a cross. 
His face I can’t understand
As if moaning, “you get used to it after a while.”
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Agustin Avatar
February 3, 2026 at 7:52 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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March 10, 2016 at 2:27 AM
Rain, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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July 5, 2015 at 1:52 AM
Rain:)deeply Wonderful, I enjoyed dropping by. Love SKAT
Brown Avatar
November 7, 2011 at 5:09 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you this morning Rain. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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