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Dilapidated by harsh weather. Ivy growing over it held it together. Not much more than a shack. My life ended there in that cul de sac. ~The Poet~ Twisting smiles along the way, Struggles and strivings of the fray. Trying to reach an ultimate goal. Hardship seeps, destroying the soul. Lest we show remorse for the deeds, Bestowing ill, on suffering it feeds. Incantations of hollow pleasure, Rustic cavorting through our leisure. Opulence rains in a copious deluge. Affluence smothers yearning so huge. Time inaudible, voices escape, Stand on the precipice with no shape. Trudging without courage so innate. Leave all behind to contemplate. Beyond reason, the battle is all uphill. Feeling the power, we carry on still. No stopping, no standing, yet defend, The last conquest a mighty dead end. Do we have the ability or the knack, To conquer in life, fate’s cul-de-sac?

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Date: 11/26/2023 10:22:00 AM
You're a very talented person! I'm going to extend an offer to you that I never considered to anyone else. If you ever feel like doing a collaboration let me know I have soup mail. Respectfully A.S.
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Date: 11/27/2023 4:21:00 AM
I think you may have read someone else's poem by mistake AS. This poem didn't even rate an honorable mention in the contest. Hehehhe. However I appreciate your comment. Thank you.
Date: 11/7/2023 4:41:00 PM
Very engaging poetry, SV. Life has its challenges for each of us. I like the way it ended ... with hope and encouragement by stating we have the ability to conquer dead ends. Have a great week, my friend. Bill
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Date: 11/8/2023 9:45:00 AM
Thank you so much Bill

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