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De Sss I Re

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/20/2015 12:48:00 AM

Hello my good friend James, awesome win. Linda

James Inman
Date: 12/20/2015 11:49:00 AM

PD, Hi! Thanks for the visit. I just finished reading your last two poems. Couldn't comment on "Welcome To My World," didn't know what to say when I was reading it. The humorous tone is great and as always it is wonderfully written but I think from the comments, there may be something deeper there. We all have our addictions, some are reasonably harmless. I hope this is for you. Hope you have a wonderful, wonderful Christmas.

Skat A

Date: 12/19/2015 2:10:00 PM

Hi James, congratulations on your nice win. SKAT

James Inman
Date: 12/19/2015 2:12:00 PM

Thank you so much SKAT.

Michael Tor

Date: 12/19/2015 6:01:00 AM

I love Viv's thought I will just mirror it. Congratulations James on your win!!!

James Inman
Date: 12/19/2015 1:12:00 PM

Thank you Michael.

Viv Wigley

Date: 12/19/2015 2:58:00 AM

mmmm...connn.....gratsssssss J..am.e.ss..... Nope, you do it much better than I. Congrats, James. Regards, Viv

James Inman
Date: 12/19/2015 1:11:00 PM

Thanks Viv,lol.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 12/19/2015 2:36:00 AM

James, *** I didn't mention alliteration in my preferred forms, but I like the formatting and the way you displayed trembles and thrills within the lines hence I couldn't ignore this or I don't like to place this as HM… Kudos! Thanks for participating!~hugs and smiles, Olive Eloisa =`)

James Inman
Date: 12/19/2015 1:10:00 PM

Sorry, Olive, but I just had to. Thank you for the nice comment and for hosting a great contest.

Viv Wigley

Date: 11/26/2015 9:45:00 PM

it works if read in a deep bass voice, as if chewing a toffee, James. I may try reciting this next time I'm on a bus next to a pretty girl. See you in court :) Viv

James Inman
Date: 11/26/2015 11:13:00 PM

LOL, please, just don't mention my name. Last thing I need is to get involved in an international incident, Viv.

Skat A

Date: 11/26/2015 8:13:00 AM

Wow, James, thank you for sharing your poem. Happy Thanksgiving. Love Skat

James Inman
Date: 11/26/2015 11:47:00 AM

Thank you so much for sharing a few moments of your Thanksgiving with me SKAT. Happy Thanksgiving to you.

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 11/26/2015 4:48:00 AM

i really like this - you asked jan if it works, and it most definitely does; top marks for originality!

James Inman
Date: 11/26/2015 11:43:00 AM

Thank you Charlotte, very kind comment.

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 11/25/2015 3:08:00 PM

When I first glance on your write I view as nonsense, but when I patiently read it, it is a lot meaningful. Good luck in the contest............A.M.

James Inman
Date: 11/25/2015 4:44:00 PM

HaHa, I like your comment Afolabi. Your right it does look like nonsense. Thank you for taking the time to re-read it.

Jan Allison

Date: 11/25/2015 11:31:00 AM

I Love your unique take on the theme James good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx

James Inman
Date: 11/25/2015 11:51:00 AM

Thanks Jan. It's meant to be read drawing out each word and sounding each letter low and slow, like a soft whisper. Don't know if it captures that and I don't know if the form will work in the contest.