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De Sss I Re


bre.a..the     ss.o..f...t     shhha.r..e...d     wh.i..s..p..e..r....sss
     sss.i..mple    sss.e..d..u..c..t..i..ve    hhh.i..ssss.s..s..s..e...sss
sssp.o..k...en     w.o..r..d...sss     ss.ai..d     innn     brr.o..ken     ss.i..l..e...nnce
          bre.a..th...sss    sssooo     sssww.eee..t    annn.d     sss.en..sss..u..al

yourrr     llo.v..ing     lli..ght     llay..sss     sso.f..t     annn.d     lli.nnn..gerrs 
     forrr     llo..sst     llo.ne..llli...nesss     lli.ve..sss     innn     mmy     s..ou...lll
llet     yourrr     llu.sss.ciousss     lli.p..sss     a.llle..vv..i...ate     mmy     lllo..nng..ing
          ll..e...ssst     y.o..u     llea..ve     I     ammm     llo..sss...t

thrrr.o..u...gh      t.e..a...rrrr     sst.a..i..n..e...d     t.o..u..chhh..e..ssss
      taaa..k...e    mee   ww.i..thh      t.e..nn..d..e..rrr..n..e...sss
temmm.p..errr     the.ssse     ter.ssse     fi.nn..g..errrss     annn.d     tea.chh     meee
    tooo     thhrrr.i..lll    y.o..u..rrr     trrr.e..m...bling   thrrr.obb..ing temmm...ple


11/25/15

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/20/2015 12:48:00 AM

Hello my good friend James, awesome win. Linda

James Inman
Date: 12/20/2015 11:49:00 AM

PD, Hi! Thanks for the visit. I just finished reading your last two poems. Couldn't comment on "Welcome To My World," didn't know what to say when I was reading it. The humorous tone is great and as always it is wonderfully written but I think from the comments, there may be something deeper there. We all have our addictions, some are reasonably harmless. I hope this is for you. Hope you have a wonderful, wonderful Christmas.

Skat A

Date: 12/19/2015 2:10:00 PM

Hi James, congratulations on your nice win. SKAT

James Inman
Date: 12/19/2015 2:12:00 PM

Thank you so much SKAT.

Michael Tor

Date: 12/19/2015 6:01:00 AM

I love Viv's thought I will just mirror it. Congratulations James on your win!!!

James Inman
Date: 12/19/2015 1:12:00 PM

Thank you Michael.

Viv Wigley

Date: 12/19/2015 2:58:00 AM

mmmm...connn.....gratsssssss J..am.e.ss..... Nope, you do it much better than I. Congrats, James. Regards, Viv

James Inman
Date: 12/19/2015 1:11:00 PM

Thanks Viv,lol.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 12/19/2015 2:36:00 AM

James, *** I didn't mention alliteration in my preferred forms, but I like the formatting and the way you displayed trembles and thrills within the lines hence I couldn't ignore this or I don't like to place this as HM… Kudos! Thanks for participating!~hugs and smiles, Olive Eloisa =`)

James Inman
Date: 12/19/2015 1:10:00 PM

Sorry, Olive, but I just had to. Thank you for the nice comment and for hosting a great contest.

Viv Wigley

Date: 11/26/2015 9:45:00 PM

it works if read in a deep bass voice, as if chewing a toffee, James. I may try reciting this next time I'm on a bus next to a pretty girl. See you in court :) Viv

James Inman
Date: 11/26/2015 11:13:00 PM

LOL, please, just don't mention my name. Last thing I need is to get involved in an international incident, Viv.

Skat A

Date: 11/26/2015 8:13:00 AM

Wow, James, thank you for sharing your poem. Happy Thanksgiving. Love Skat

James Inman
Date: 11/26/2015 11:47:00 AM

Thank you so much for sharing a few moments of your Thanksgiving with me SKAT. Happy Thanksgiving to you.

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 11/26/2015 4:48:00 AM

i really like this - you asked jan if it works, and it most definitely does; top marks for originality!

James Inman
Date: 11/26/2015 11:43:00 AM

Thank you Charlotte, very kind comment.

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 11/25/2015 3:08:00 PM

When I first glance on your write I view as nonsense, but when I patiently read it, it is a lot meaningful. Good luck in the contest............A.M.

James Inman
Date: 11/25/2015 4:44:00 PM

HaHa, I like your comment Afolabi. Your right it does look like nonsense. Thank you for taking the time to re-read it.

Jan Allison

Date: 11/25/2015 11:31:00 AM

I Love your unique take on the theme James good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx

James Inman
Date: 11/25/2015 11:51:00 AM

Thanks Jan. It's meant to be read drawing out each word and sounding each letter low and slow, like a soft whisper. Don't know if it captures that and I don't know if the form will work in the contest.