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Through oblivious naivety with the dexterity of malachite A siderite gesture The serenity of silence in the face of jeopardy A reflection of the ambiguous as in a mirror Sage flinched and shot daggers of moss and slate, edged with precision, pinned Disconnected from wings and steely intent Like the sad pillow, the canvas is too elfin.                       It lacks the size to conjure the image of the sea. Charming Chartreuse Promenade synchronized with a sparse brook with the tides as they rise and fall Time is insightfully tamed with emerald distractions.
Written: February 14, 2023

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Date: 2/15/2023 5:12:00 PM
such interesting imagery you use here. Loved the part about serenity
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Date: 2/15/2023 7:05:00 AM
Ornate vocabulary my friend: Time is insightfully tamed with emerald distractions... superb images throughout.
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Date: 2/15/2023 1:40:00 AM
I loved the serenity of silence. Lovely poem. Best for a win.
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