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A Brian Strand Contest: You Choose 2024 Poetry 8 Aug 2024... Resubmitred 25 Dec 24 - The entrant asks for sponsor's indulgence where phrases extend to next lines...I am using a cellphone which has no app for standard size of word document .

Dream-like is she, gleaming softly through gauze of faded moon Auroral her flame imbued with wings so regal Yellowing sky's revue through wisps of haloed dew-- Somehow, she guides me through deep prayer, To exalt her for baptism of new awakenings, promises made holy And how she , Dawn, unveils what is pure in my sacred world Reflecting her timeless morn... angel of first sun, daystar!

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/5/2025 6:43:00 AM

Back with congratulations on your winner in Brian's contest. Creative and expressive lines. Thanks for sharing this winner with us. Sara K

Duke Beaufort

Date: 8/12/2024 5:49:00 AM

Nette, this is a beautiful tribute to dawn and makes me feel fortunate to have this particular day and the privilege to read something really beautiful. Lovely indeed. Smiles and Tys!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/11/2024 4:37:00 PM

I really like the indentations to keep it close to Acrostic where we can read it downward. you made it unique and beautiful as always

Silent One

Date: 8/11/2024 1:34:00 PM

Lovely acrostic with great choice of words..

Yolanda Nicholsen

Date: 8/11/2024 8:26:00 AM

I adore Daystar very lovely write enjoy your day many blessings.

Ink Empress

Date: 8/11/2024 4:52:00 AM

So beautiful and serene how youv written this soulful acrostic with such delicate and captivating imagery! Love the way you phrase things. Best wishes for the contest. Well woven and delivered

Paul Callus

Date: 8/11/2024 1:03:00 AM

Phrases extending to next lines definitely does not effect the technicality and the delivery of this beautiful Acrostic, Nette! Excellent is your work which, as always, leaves me in awe. ~ Hugs // paul

Paige Hind

Date: 8/10/2024 3:46:00 PM

Lovely- enjoyed reading "Somehow, she guides me through deep prayer" ..."sacred world" loved it

Len Gasun

Date: 8/10/2024 7:47:00 AM

Oh, this is so splendid my dearest friend Nette! I like this a lot more than mine. Thank you so much for sharing. I tried this promp too by the inspiration of the song. But, not sure if I did it right. Just scribbled it a while ago while resting from my 2 tutorial jobs this am and pm. About the fb, I'll be at sm tom. ok. I'll be back tom. coz my eyelids are quite dropping now. Thank you so much for sharing. Have a marvelous weekend. Sending love and hugs

Crystol Woods

Date: 8/10/2024 7:22:00 AM

So descriptive and delicate...a beautiful contender that will no doubt place high! Xo

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/10/2024 5:18:00 AM

Creative one. Reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Way to go. Sara K

Valsa George

Date: 8/9/2024 9:34:00 PM

"Auroral her flame imbued with rays so calm Yellowing sky's vignette through wisps of haloed mist --" This is so lovely. I liked it from hilt to heel. I am sure this will be placed high. All the best dear, Nette.