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There are days granted when an unhurried still settles the space where the world binds to what is you and folds the sense of difference into a seamless whole. Speech becomes the whisperings of leaves, raindrops, forest murmurs in the tall trees. Touch is in the tendrils of a vine, waving in air in search of an anchoring branch and sight, the composite of every living eye into an almost infinite view. There is no boundary to distinguish at what point being becomes something other than all until sadly it falls asleep and once again disintegrates into a dream and a separate you.

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Date: 2/24/2024 4:18:00 PM
I share Di11y's enthusiasm for your words and your poetic style--something mesmerizing and truthful about your words. There was a sense of sadness and loneliness to this poem with no human voice, touch. I liked 'disintegrates into a dream.' Keep on writing, Paul. You've got the gift.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 2/25/2024 3:23:00 AM
thank you, Paul, for your reply...I agree. Writing poetry, is such a peculiar experience. It requires solitude for its creation making me feel a bit alone. Yet it is a participatory experience with readers. I'm grateful to be one of your participatory readers :-)
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Paul Willason
Date: 2/24/2024 10:18:00 PM
Heartfelt thanks Sara for such praise, gives lift to my winged creations. Your words carry and give reason as to why poetry matters and reminds me that it is not a solitary artform afterall. Privileged to have you, my dear Sara, as a reader. Blessings.
Date: 2/24/2024 3:52:00 PM
I'm mesmerised! Your writing is completely you and completely beautiful! Gorgeous is the way you create sentences and thankful is the way I receive them. I'm grateful for your poetry Paul, you are stand out special x
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Paul Willason
Date: 2/24/2024 10:05:00 PM
Feel reluctant to crawl into the space of that person you so describe...indeed feel honored by your words DD. I must confess that in my old age it's a delight to be able to pen a few words that can attract such gracious comment. Sincerest thanks.

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