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Daylight Disappears

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As shifting shadows merge within the night, darkness devours disheveled silhouettes. And daylight disappears, fading from sight, as a splendiferous sun slowly sets. Twilight's crimson-colored clouds coalesce, tinting the skies a cotton candy pink. And yet, darkness descends nevertheless, tattooing treetops with ebony ink. Sequined stars sparkle in the midnight sky, glittering gems in the fabric of space. And today toasts tomorrow with a sigh, as a motley moon mirrors Sol's far face. Moonbeams mold monsters mostly out of black, sculpting scary shapes with chisels of light. And female mosquitoes mount their attack as buzzing, bloodthirsty biters alight. Silence shushes sounds, stirring in the day as night's nocturnal creatures start to wake. And stridulating crickets chirp away, tweeting till dawn dawns and dreamers awake. (Alliteration-Quatrain) 12,15,2019

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Juliet Ligon

Date: 1/22/2023 8:26:00 AM

Magnificent descriptions and fluid alliteration. This is a fav for me! (I'm not sure if accidentally included the fourth stanza twice or if it's intentional for emphasis.)

Emile Pinet
Date: 1/22/2023 9:58:00 AM

Thanks, Juliet, I appreciate your comments and pointing out that one verse was repeated., that was not intentional, my friend, Emile.

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 1/22/2023 6:56:00 AM

Back again with congratulations on your win in Brian's contest! :)

Emile Pinet
Date: 1/22/2023 2:27:00 PM

Thanks, Linda, I appreciate it, my friend, Emile.

Susan Ashley

Date: 11/3/2022 5:58:00 PM

Dear Emile, I appreciate not only your skill with alliteration but also your wonderful use of assonance, like "shading shapeless".. and "spider's spindle" is just a stroke of genius! Exquisite imagery too, my friend "Moonbeams mold monsters mostly out of black, /sculpting scary shapes with chisels of light" - wow! Love chisels of light! Beautiful and expressive throughout! Congratulations for your excellent win in Mark's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Emile Pinet
Date: 1/22/2023 2:28:00 PM

Thanks, Susan, as always, your comments are both welcomed and appreciated, you bring a ray of sunshine to my day, my friend, Emile.

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 10/31/2022 6:40:00 AM

Beautifully laid open for a bask in the night's glow. Congratulations on your win my friend Emile! :)

Emile Pinet
Date: 10/31/2022 10:16:00 AM

Thanks, Linda, as always, your comments are both welcomed and appreciated, my friend, Emile.

Lin Lane

Date: 10/27/2022 9:41:00 AM

Emile, your skill at creating memorable poetry is showcased very elegantly in this write. Congratulations on it being chosen for the winning list.

Emile Pinet
Date: 10/27/2022 10:11:00 AM

Thanks, Lin, I welcome and appreciate your support my friend, Emile.

Mark Toney

Date: 10/26/2022 1:14:00 PM

Emile, this is a delightful quatrain infused with a generous amount of alliteration. Your brilliant word choice makes this a Fav for me. Congratulations on your win on Mile 17 of my 2022 Poetry Marathon Contest. Keep your running shoes on, because Mile 18 has already started.

Emile Pinet
Date: 10/27/2022 10:12:00 AM

Thanks, Mark, I am honored to be on your winner's list, my friend, Emile.

Sam Kauffman

Date: 10/26/2022 10:25:00 AM

Emile, this is sumptuous, splendiferous, with a little sass from your stridulating crickets! Splendid images! Super alliteration! Sending you congratulations and blessings!

Emile Pinet
Date: 10/26/2022 11:50:00 AM

Thanks, Sam, as always, I welcome and appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 12/17/2019 5:49:00 AM

Gorgeous! Best wishes and congratulations on your win in Brian's contest, Emile - keep the ink flowing, my friend! Blessings! :o)

Emile Pinet
Date: 12/17/2019 7:22:00 AM

Thanks Gregory, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.

Na Na

Date: 12/16/2019 3:00:00 PM

Congrats on your winning poem Emile

Emile Pinet
Date: 12/16/2019 5:00:00 PM

Thanks NA NA, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.