Tim Smith Poet Free verse

Daydream Dancing

Clair de Lune filters 
with wings
through graceful waves of air
in every raindrop ping
creating our symphony

      spin me a room
      weave me a rainbow
      be my shining diamond
      always holding me near
      play me, persuade me

Emerge in the window to my heart
holding strong same beliefs
pulling pirouetted dreams
a duet of two 
roses blooming

      spin me a picture
      paint me a vivid view
      raise me from rags to riches
      never throw me away
      lift me, kiss me

Come dance with me

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Lisa Ricci May 12, 2017 at 5:20 AM Tim Tim Tim. Thus the Mighty Free Verse stands tall and rules. I've seen the entry by Darren and this is a wonderful continuation. Excuse me, a perfect continuation with your words format and layout. Your words here before us reach the emotive factor. Enjoy the morning. Well done completely.

Anne-Lise Andresen May 11, 2017 at 7:25 AM - A dance that can make anyone dizzy of joy, Tim :) - Beautiful ... love it - a 7 - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Wilma Neels May 11, 2017 at 3:53 AM Awesome write Tim. Loved that you drew your inspiration from Darren's one! Loved this

Sara Ella May 10, 2017 at 11:03 PM Oh I LOVE this Tim. Clair de Lune and dancing! So romantic and lovely <3

Arthur Vaso May 10, 2017 at 9:09 PM This is so good time, and both yours and Darren's poems go so well together!!!

White Wolf May 10, 2017 at 7:58 PM An awesome write, Tim! So full of imagery! Beautiful

Akkina Downing May 10, 2017 at 6:36 PM An outstanding spin, Tim. I just love it :)

Sunlite Wanter May 10, 2017 at 6:23 PM I read Darren's poem and its comments, and I have been thrilled by two masters with still different interpretations! I love this. A 7.

Carol B. May 10, 2017 at 5:45 PM You really have a stunning poem here Tim. It oozes love and romance blissfully:)

Lin Lane May 10, 2017 at 3:42 PM "Spin me a room...weave me a rainbow..." from the fertile imagination of poet, and you are.

Ilene Bauer May 10, 2017 at 3:22 PM beautiful imagery, tim!

Charmaine Chircop May 10, 2017 at 2:30 PM I read Darren s poem and loved it..and so I love this fantastic poem..Made me sing it out..A fave.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart May 10, 2017 at 2:27 PM Wonderful Tim! 7 A beutiful response to Darren's master piece :) xomo!

Darren White May 10, 2017 at 12:47 PM forgot the 7 ;p

Chris Green May 10, 2017 at 12:43 PM A beautiful companion piece to Darren's poem Tim. This fits the theme and the feel perfectly. You couldn't have picked a better poet to be inspired by.

Darren White May 10, 2017 at 12:43 PM Wowser :) I love this Tim, what a perfect poem! It is soooooo beautiful and passionate, 7 and fav!