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Daydream Dancing

Clair de Lune filters with wings through graceful waves of air in every raindrop ping creating our symphony spin me a room weave me a rainbow be my shining diamond always holding me near play me, persuade me Emerge in the window to my heart holding strong same beliefs pulling pirouetted dreams a duet of two roses blooming spin me a picture paint me a vivid view raise me from rags to riches never throw me away lift me, kiss me Come dance with me

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Lisa Ricci

Date: 5/12/2017 5:20:00 AM

Tim Tim Tim. Thus the Mighty Free Verse stands tall and rules. I've seen the entry by Darren and this is a wonderful continuation. Excuse me, a perfect continuation with your words format and layout. Your words here before us reach the emotive factor. Enjoy the morning. Well done completely.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/11/2017 7:25:00 AM

- A dance that can make anyone dizzy of joy, Tim :) - Beautiful ... love it - a 7 - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Wilma Neels

Date: 5/11/2017 3:53:00 AM

Awesome write Tim. Loved that you drew your inspiration from Darren's one! Loved this

Sara Ella

Date: 5/10/2017 11:03:00 PM

Oh I LOVE this Tim. Clair de Lune and dancing! So romantic and lovely <3

Arthur Vaso

Date: 5/10/2017 9:09:00 PM

This is so good time, and both yours and Darren's poems go so well together!!!

White Wolf

Date: 5/10/2017 7:58:00 PM

An awesome write, Tim! So full of imagery! Beautiful

Akkina Downing

Date: 5/10/2017 6:36:00 PM

An outstanding spin, Tim. I just love it :)

Sunlite Wanter

Date: 5/10/2017 6:23:00 PM

I read Darren's poem and its comments, and I have been thrilled by two masters with still different interpretations! I love this. A 7.

Carol B.

Date: 5/10/2017 5:45:00 PM

You really have a stunning poem here Tim. It oozes love and romance blissfully:)

Lin Lane

Date: 5/10/2017 3:42:00 PM

"Spin me a room...weave me a rainbow..." from the fertile imagination of poet, and you are.

Ilene Bauer

Date: 5/10/2017 3:22:00 PM

beautiful imagery, tim!

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 5/10/2017 2:30:00 PM

I read Darren s poem and loved it..and so I love this fantastic poem..Made me sing it out..A fave.

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 5/10/2017 2:27:00 PM

Wonderful Tim! 7 A beutiful response to Darren's master piece :) xomo!

Darren White

Date: 5/10/2017 12:47:00 PM

forgot the 7 ;p

Darren White

Date: 5/10/2017 12:43:00 PM

Wowser :) I love this Tim, what a perfect poem! It is soooooo beautiful and passionate, 7 and fav!

Chris Green

Date: 5/10/2017 12:43:00 PM

A beautiful companion piece to Darren's poem Tim. This fits the theme and the feel perfectly. You couldn't have picked a better poet to be inspired by.