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Daydream Dancing

Clair de Lune filters 
with wings
through graceful waves of air
in every raindrop ping
creating our symphony

      spin me a room
      weave me a rainbow
      be my shining diamond
      always holding me near
      play me, persuade me

Emerge in the window to my heart
holding strong same beliefs
pulling pirouetted dreams
a duet of two 
roses blooming

      spin me a picture
      paint me a vivid view
      raise me from rags to riches
      never throw me away
      lift me, kiss me

Come dance with me

Copyright © Tim Smith | Year Posted 2017

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Lisa Ricci Date: 5/12/2017 5:20:00 AM Tim Tim Tim. Thus the Mighty Free Verse stands tall and rules. I've seen the entry by Darren and this is a wonderful continuation. Excuse me, a perfect continuation with your words format and layout. Your words here before us reach the emotive factor. Enjoy the morning. Well done completely. Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 5/11/2017 7:25:00 AM - A dance that can make anyone dizzy of joy, Tim :) - Beautiful ... love it - a 7 - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply

Wilma Neels Date: 5/11/2017 3:53:00 AM Awesome write Tim. Loved that you drew your inspiration from Darren's one! Loved this Login to Reply

Sara Ella Date: 5/10/2017 11:03:00 PM Oh I LOVE this Tim. Clair de Lune and dancing! So romantic and lovely <3 Login to Reply

Arthur Vaso Date: 5/10/2017 9:09:00 PM This is so good time, and both yours and Darren's poems go so well together!!! Login to Reply

White Wolf Date: 5/10/2017 7:58:00 PM An awesome write, Tim! So full of imagery! Beautiful Login to Reply

Akkina Downing Date: 5/10/2017 6:36:00 PM An outstanding spin, Tim. I just love it :) Login to Reply

Sunlite Wanter Date: 5/10/2017 6:23:00 PM I read Darren's poem and its comments, and I have been thrilled by two masters with still different interpretations! I love this. A 7. Login to Reply

Carol B. Date: 5/10/2017 5:45:00 PM You really have a stunning poem here Tim. It oozes love and romance blissfully:) Login to Reply

Lin Lane Date: 5/10/2017 3:42:00 PM "Spin me a room...weave me a rainbow..." from the fertile imagination of poet, and you are. Login to Reply

Ilene Bauer Date: 5/10/2017 3:22:00 PM beautiful imagery, tim! Login to Reply

Charmaine Chircop Date: 5/10/2017 2:30:00 PM I read Darren s poem and loved it..and so I love this fantastic poem..Made me sing it out..A fave. Login to Reply

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 5/10/2017 2:27:00 PM Wonderful Tim! 7 A beutiful response to Darren's master piece :) xomo! Login to Reply

Darren White Date: 5/10/2017 12:47:00 PM forgot the 7 ;p Login to Reply

Darren White Date: 5/10/2017 12:43:00 PM Wowser :) I love this Tim, what a perfect poem! It is soooooo beautiful and passionate, 7 and fav! Login to Reply

Chris Green Date: 5/10/2017 12:43:00 PM A beautiful companion piece to Darren's poem Tim. This fits the theme and the feel perfectly. You couldn't have picked a better poet to be inspired by. Login to Reply