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Daybreak

Dawn, with gauzy garments bright Her gentle fingers gently pull the light From the secret bosom of the night.. In the glade , in silent splendor stands The stag, surveyor of this forest land King of that singular moment grand Pearls on drooping fronds of green Bowed in supplication so they seem Just one moment in this misty dream This single day awakes with humble pride With His breath it's constant guide Letting morning's quiet peace abide.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 7/24/2010 7:35:00 AM
Really liked the third stanza..'Pearls on drooping fronds of green Bowed in supplication so they seem Just one moment in this misty dream' .Amazing play of words! Your poem gave me a smile! Emily
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Date: 7/24/2010 7:14:00 AM
so pretty!! great work you have placed in my vision today!
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Date: 7/23/2010 9:21:00 PM
Dear Barbara, such serenity You must have been waiting and watching for the Birth of a new Day Exceptional Write LOVE YOU ALWAYS ...HG
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Date: 7/23/2010 5:28:00 PM
Nice thoughts with fine images for daybreak.
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