Day of Reckoning

One summer hot, 
clear day,
It was time to deal with dirty laundry.
In silence,
with a countenance of stone,
unrevealing deep emotions,
things of necessity were done.
She hung bleached-white sheets 
out on the line to dry,
then, turning to him,
her iron will broke,
storm clouds rose,
her eyes accused,
yet, all she could say was;
“Don’t leave.”

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 2/7/2010 10:34:00 AM
Excellent control, very balance description of the world outside that context the emotion. Good!
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Date: 2/3/2010 7:14:00 AM
Congrats Virginia on your featured poem of the week on Soup..luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 2/3/2010 7:06:00 AM
Yes! unrequited love weakens one. Congrats on this selection. Love, daver
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Date: 2/2/2010 3:45:00 PM
Congrats on the feature. I love the different levels of meaning. Touching. Happy Writing.
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Date: 2/2/2010 11:54:00 AM
Many congrats on your featured piece. Rgds Janette
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Date: 2/1/2010 1:45:00 PM
Many congratulations on your poetry being featured this week >> James
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Date: 2/1/2010 5:39:00 AM
Contrats to you on being featured by PoetrySoup this week. Keep pen and paper on hand & never say never! AR
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Date: 2/1/2010 4:28:00 AM
Congratulations on your featured poetry this week Virginia. May you have many more. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/31/2010 5:48:00 PM
congrats on the featured poem!!
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Date: 1/25/2010 9:55:00 AM
This is strong very much so, to me, it sounds like he cheated or something [Dirty laundry reminds me of that] and even still she couldnt stand him leaving...sometimes loves just like that. xo Rain
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Date: 1/22/2010 5:12:00 PM
I have enjoyed reading your poetry this evening Virginia. I hope you have a wonderful weekend and that you find inspiration along the way. Love, Carol
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