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Day Light

Green hue, lights reflection------------------BEAUTIFUL Sunny with a chance of a spring--------------DAY! Avian melodies chirp, playfully,----------------SIEZE My memories and hope -----------------------THE Feelings will sustain me through the sad-----MOMENTS! For Dane Ann and HGHarvey Esquire The End Line Form ~~~Recieved honorable mention in the contest by Dane Ann~~~~

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/2/2010 11:15:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Dane Ann's contest Doris. Love, Carol

Noel Villarosa

Date: 3/2/2010 1:27:00 AM

This is beautiful Doris, great win for this contest. Congratulaltions! from (^_^) Noel.

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 3/1/2010 10:23:00 PM

Nice write, Doris! Congrats on your honorable win in the contest. Best wishes, Caroline.

Audrey Haick

Date: 3/1/2010 8:37:00 PM

Enjoyed reading this...My congratulations on your win in the contest. Thank you for posting your kind comments to my poem. Peace, Audrey

John Freeman

Date: 3/1/2010 5:34:00 PM

Congratulations on your Honorable Mention Doris. Awesome end line statement. "Beautiful Day Sieze The Moments!" Agape, Moses

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 3/1/2010 5:03:00 PM

Congratulations Doris, for your success in my contest! EVERYONE that participated in the first ever End Line Word poetry form contest deserves drum rolls and kudos! Every entry was wonderful. Picking winners was nearly impossible…but had to be done. Thank you very much for supporting this contest. Poetry Soup poets are super!!! Lovingly, Dane Ann

Marty Owens

Date: 3/1/2010 5:01:00 PM

Congratulations on your win...enjoyed...Marty

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/1/2010 4:19:00 PM

Congrats Doris on your HM in the first ever End Line Word contest.. a great poem and meaningful message.. enjoy your special win tonight.. my son is leaving at 9PM EST for his tour of military duty to Iraq so I am a total mess right now .. just wanted to extend my congrats to u..luv..Linda-Marie

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/1/2010 2:50:00 PM

Wonderful, Doris! Congratulations on your success in the contest. Love, Carolyn

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 2/25/2010 4:26:00 PM

Dear Doris, Hello my Southern Belle, YOUR First End Word Describes This POEM It is a PERFECTLY Written "End Line Word" Form YOU "SIEZE" the Moment to Advance this Form of POETRY Thank-YOU YOUR Avid Admirer ALWAYS...HG -- SOUP MAIL CALL ( in 5 minutes ) ...HG

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 2/11/2010 2:48:00 PM

Hi Doris. Please be sure to enter the End Line Word member poetry contest. (soup mail) Lovingly, Dane

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 2/10/2010 8:34:00 AM

Doris, I have definitely missed the soup for the past week. But I am back home, now! It is great to be once again, reading wonderful poetry. And what a delightful surprise it was to find this gem!. Thank you for trying our new poetry form: "End Line Word" This write is beautiful no, more than beautiful...magnificent poem. And also I thank you for your recent comments on my work. And thank you in advance, for understanding my delay in thanking you. Lovingly, Dane Ann

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 2/8/2010 4:43:00 AM

A wonderful message in a wonderful form. This is really nice Doris. Blessings, Connie

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/6/2010 8:08:00 AM

Great job on this new form Doris which HG suggested I read today... I already attempted one with my Stolen Love and am working on three more to post... u did a beautiful job... we all need to seize those precious moments of every day... luv.. Linda-Marie..

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 2/6/2010 7:21:00 AM

Dear Doris Thank-YOU for Participating in the Promotion of this " End Line Word " form Please read Linda-Marie Bariana'POEM "Stolen Love " and Marty Owens' POEM " Poor Scarlet Never Learns " I have asked them to read YOUR " Day Light " Dane Ann is away on Family Matters and will be back Monday I'm sure she will read this Marvelous "End Line Word" form POETRY Thank-YOU for YOUR Gracious Comments YOUR Avid Admirer ALWAYS...HG

Marty Owens

Date: 2/4/2010 5:29:00 PM

I love this form...I'm gonna have to try my hand at it...Enjoyed...Marty

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/4/2010 12:35:00 PM

This is a really fun read and a great message. Hope you are having a nice week. LUv, Andrea

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/4/2010 11:11:00 AM

Thank you for sharing your End Line Form poetry with us today Doris. Love, Carol

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 2/3/2010 9:32:00 PM

Dear Doris, Bravo, A Standing Ovation To YOU Young Lady Excellent in Form and Message Welcome to the "End Line Word" Club Do YOU Think You can Talk YOUR MOM into Trying This YOUR Avivd Admirer ALWAYS...HG Give me 5 minutes and Check YOUR SOUP MAIL

John Loving Iii

Date: 2/3/2010 6:31:00 PM

looks like something i'll have to try. john

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 2/3/2010 6:23:00 PM

Very very well done. Y'all getting pretty good at these!-Robert

Jeralynn Clark

Date: 2/3/2010 4:35:00 PM

Great Message...interesting form! Jeralynn