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As dawn breaks our golden sun gleams la Luna brings us dancing moon beams   Gold sunshine provides us with daylight dark skies show twinkling stars each night When the sun rises we see orange hues yet evening skies are of dark inky blues The sunshine gives us both light and heat when darkness falls then day’s complete List With A Twist Poetry Contest Sponsored by Charles Messina 02/23/21

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Date: 4/18/2021 9:27:00 AM
one of my favorite contrasts in life: moon vs. sun; day vs night. BIG congrats in the contest, jan!
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Date: 4/17/2021 8:41:00 PM
Superb write, Jan! Congrats on your win!
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Date: 3/9/2021 12:51:00 PM
Night , night God bless Sweet dreams See you in the morning
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Date: 3/6/2021 11:31:00 AM
Great contrast of the orange hues of day and inky tones of night, hope this does well for you~
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Date: 2/27/2021 11:54:00 PM
Short and to the point and masterfully created, with loads of sprinkles of imagination - great entry, good luck for a 1st! Hugs and blessings Jan Jennifer
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Date: 2/24/2021 11:48:00 AM
It was easier for me to imagine a man and woman with a twist, so you did a great job on this! Aloha! Rico
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Date: 2/24/2021 11:18:00 AM
Nicely done Jan. It flows like honey. A winneer for sure. God Bless, JB
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Date: 2/24/2021 9:44:00 AM
I like this twist, Jan: Real poetry instead of a 'laundry list!' Lovely penned. G.L. in the contest. Happiness and Joy, Gershon
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Date: 2/24/2021 8:02:00 AM
This is sweet and lovely in its contrast and execution. I really enjoyed it, Happy Wednesday Jan xxoo
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Date: 2/24/2021 7:15:00 AM
I didn't understand what he wanted. You did this beautifully. Contrast between two wonderfully captured. Take care, Rama
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Date: 2/23/2021 10:56:00 PM
We have plenty of sunshine these days when it usually rains a lot. But no heat. Wish spring will come. ~~
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Date: 2/23/2021 5:13:00 PM
That’s lovely Jan, words and the picture ~ Belle :-) x
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Date: 2/23/2021 3:57:00 PM
beautifully composed, jan! best of luck in the contest...
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Date: 2/23/2021 5:01:00 PM
Thanks Ilene i enter fewer and fewer contests I use them to inspire me to write, a win is a bonus:-) hugs Jan x
Date: 2/23/2021 3:51:00 PM
Like how you've done this Jan running the two together. Best of luck. Tom
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Date: 2/23/2021 5:00:00 PM
not sure if its what Charlie is after but I have tried lol:-) hugs Jan xx

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