Dawn's Glory

Dawn ached to be seen,
Thus upon my goodbye,
To you,
Curiously….
I peeked at her

The sun’s might hit my bitter eyes
Where first I refused to see her
In my hellish, seething cries
Though she was soft,
Insistent and kind 

How could I hate such a light,
Radiating willingly upon my dark and dank existence? 
I wanted her to descend,
So I may wallow in my risen hells
So that I would have reason
To stay forever inside

I said goodbye
To give her rise

I prayed for breath to return to me
For joy to ease in our lives
For purpose to manifest
In a spurring geyser of fruition

This solstice of darkness shall flourish no more!
I am pressed to excavate ancient depths for this source
Of love that I have long rejected
To embrace meaningless evenings of lament 
Yes—I loved your complexity 
But it was truth and serenity,
And that eternity I loved more

I said goodbye
To give her rise

To give her rise
Not alone,
But in my life
Dawn’s glory 
Rooted in my very will
To let go, 
Wonder,
And be still
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Inman Avatar
November 14, 2017 at 3:24 PM
Laura, nice to read an uplifting verse from you. Dawn never gives up, it's always there when we are ready to see it. A beautiful write filled with strength.
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November 14, 2017 at 8:50 PM
So true! Thanks, James. We must enjoy the many dawns to come! The light is at our full disposal-no using in shunning it, because it will outshine every shadowy part of us. <3~Laura
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November 10, 2017 at 11:35 PM
Very beautiful Poetry! I really enjoyed reading.
Breidenthal Avatar
November 12, 2017 at 8:52 PM
Thanks, Arthur. I appreciate your visit! <3~Laura
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