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Dawning

After a dark night, Of slumbering solitude: Bright rays pierce the sky.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 1/2/2010 8:16:00 PM
Beautiful...I love it...Marty
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Date: 1/2/2010 8:04:00 PM
another lovely haiku..BG
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Date: 1/2/2010 8:04:00 PM
another lovely haiku..BG
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Date: 1/2/2010 6:55:00 PM
Raul~ a very nice picture you created I love your Haiku's Laura :)
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Date: 1/2/2010 4:50:00 PM
Very expressive Haiku. Keep the pen painting sunshine. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work. Sara
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Date: 1/2/2010 4:42:00 PM
Scu serenity in this poem. Good use of imagery. Thank you for sharing your talent with us and for your kind comment. Karen
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Date: 1/2/2010 4:13:00 PM
great job capturing the dawn, pen on
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Date: 1/2/2010 2:37:00 PM
Wonderful picture painted with this one. To be captured on camera. Happy New Year Déirdre
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Date: 1/2/2010 2:26:00 PM
Ilove this Haiku..Bright Rays in my country too, A very good morning Dawn followed with a Bright luminious Moon:)Though its very very cold at the moment..Can feel the warmth Of Sunshine Here Raul..Lovely Haiku..HAPPY NEW Year,,,Charma
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