Dawning

After a dark night,
Of slumbering solitude:
Bright rays pierce the sky.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Owens Avatar
January 2, 2010 at 8:16 PM
Beautiful...I love it...Marty
Gorelick Avatar
January 2, 2010 at 8:04 PM
another lovely haiku..BG
Gorelick Avatar
January 2, 2010 at 8:04 PM
another lovely haiku..BG
Mckenzie Avatar
January 2, 2010 at 6:55 PM
Raul~ a very nice picture you created I love your Haiku's Laura :)
Kendrick Avatar
January 2, 2010 at 4:50 PM
Very expressive Haiku. Keep the pen painting sunshine. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work. Sara
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January 2, 2010 at 4:42 PM
Scu serenity in this poem. Good use of imagery. Thank you for sharing your talent with us and for your kind comment. Karen
Culverhouse Avatar
January 2, 2010 at 4:13 PM
great job capturing the dawn, pen on
Omaidin Avatar
January 2, 2010 at 2:37 PM
Wonderful picture painted with this one. To be captured on camera. Happy New Year Déirdre
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January 2, 2010 at 2:26 PM
Ilove this Haiku..Bright Rays in my country too, A very good morning Dawn followed with a Bright luminious Moon:)Though its very very cold at the moment..Can feel the warmth Of Sunshine Here Raul..Lovely Haiku..HAPPY NEW Year,,,Charma
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