Dawn of My Heart

Ordinarily I lie in my bed
mentally grasping for any slender thread of slumber
which I can possibly find to cling to!
But there was one time -
a morning of early April -
when rising from bed, I felt an unusual urge
to don my housecoat and walk out to the deck.

In the stillness of pre-twilight,
I stood there some time just gazing out
at the vast valley and distant lake 
of my adopted homeland.
Slowly, a sliver of lemon meringue 
began coloring the horizon.

Drawn to dawn, I let myself succumb 
to the beauty of it all.

A chorus of birds in nearby blossoming trees brightly chirruped,
heralding Easter morning's illumination.
On this day symbolic of redemption, I swear I heard
the silence of angels’ song.

Jan. 10, 2019
for the 'Free Verse Style Only' Poetry Contest
of Emile Pinet and now for Richard Lamoureux Poem of the Day poetry contest
POTD 1/13/19

Note: I felt happy, of course, to win this award. A few times in the past I had gotten POTD for poems I really did not feel deserved it, so I was pleased that I got the award for a poem I truly had felt good about after I wrote it!
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Watt Avatar
October 26, 2020 at 10:34 PM
It was nice to come back to this one, which is obviously special to you. Your 4 lines in Greg's contest are beautifully composed, but it's even nicer to see the panorama from which it sprung. I loved it then and I love it now.
Watt Avatar
August 14, 2020 at 9:53 PM
This has a quieting effect on me, my friend. So glad you thought to refer me to this write. Nature is definitely God's way of speaking directly to our hearts, a truth I know you know all about. Glorious writing, belated congratulations for the POTD honors. A fav for me.
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 28, 2019 at 6:10 AM
I am back again with my congratulations on your deserving win with this wonderful poem Andrea. I have read through all of the winners and commented. What a treat! : ) xxoo
Haight Avatar
April 27, 2019 at 6:26 PM
Andrea, a belated congratulations on your well-deserved POTD honor as well as your previous wins and podium placement in Richard's contest. So beautifully written, stirring and inspirational. Hugs, Sandra
May Avatar
April 25, 2019 at 5:40 PM
Beautifully penned Andrea...Congrats on your win..
Lamoureux Avatar
April 25, 2019 at 9:39 AM
I felt good about choosing this one Andrea. Congrats and thanks for entering my contest.
Carber Avatar
February 10, 2019 at 11:17 AM
This is one of those poems that gently pulls the reader in, closing with a great ending line, which may seem ironic to the skeptically minded but profound to those of us who believe beyond our senses and intellects. Well done, Andrea!
Godwin Avatar
February 9, 2019 at 6:36 PM
Beautiful, touched all my senses that in turn touch my heart. You took me there. Love ... CayCay
Callus Avatar
February 9, 2019 at 3:27 AM
Beautiful imagery and projection of feelings; verging on the ethereal, Andrea. Superb ending, too. Regards // paul
De Beaulieu Avatar
February 1, 2019 at 5:59 PM
Hello Andrea, all i can say is .......Wow! have a nice evening my friend.
Staton Avatar
February 1, 2019 at 6:00 AM
You paint a beautiful picture!
Pathak Avatar
January 31, 2019 at 1:28 AM
Dawn of my Heart A beautiful portrait of dawn and the feelings felt
Lawless Avatar
January 23, 2019 at 7:09 AM
Great write Andrea. Each line a speed bump slowing the reader, ushering them into the beauty of this dawn.
Ashley Avatar
January 22, 2019 at 4:40 PM
I’m happy to return with my warm congratulations for your wonderful win, Andrea. I enjoyed reading this again. Beautiful poetry. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
Pinet Avatar
January 22, 2019 at 8:43 AM
Congratulations Andrea! Your poem has placed "Third" in my PoetrySoup contest. It was a very tough contest to judge, well done my friend, Emile.
Dietrich Avatar
January 22, 2019 at 9:06 AM
Thanks so much. This is a dawn of surprise and delight!
Staton Avatar
January 18, 2019 at 7:14 AM
Love, love, love this poem! Easily visualized. Great work!
Riabi Dziri Avatar
January 14, 2019 at 3:45 PM
When dawn meets the heart, there's but light.. and love.. and a poem overflowing with beauty! Congratulations Andrea on your POTD. A recognition well earned.. My warmest wishes. Blessings.
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 13, 2019 at 12:24 PM
I am back to congratulate you on this serene piece. I miss two days because of my sore eyes and see today I missed you winning POTD! I am so happy for you my friend! I haven't been online as my little granddaughters have been with me since friday too. : ) xxoo
Warrior Avatar
January 13, 2019 at 11:04 AM
Late congrats!!! Andrea on this beautiful write...well deserving of POTD!...love & light...^WW^
Andresen Avatar
January 13, 2019 at 8:42 AM
- Congratulations on p.o.t.d., Andrea :) - Have a lovely Sunday :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Godwin Avatar
January 13, 2019 at 12:38 AM
I am officially stirred, moved and enjoying wonderful poetic awe-rushes. This free verse is a full package delivery (like that?). Awesome writing. Love ... CayCay
Nicole Avatar
January 12, 2019 at 7:42 PM
Such beautiful images you paint with your words. I feel like I am there, in the moment. This is light, carefree and peaceful. Softly wrapping around me, and my heart. Congratulations Andrea, on Poem of the Day. ~ Brandy
Ashley Avatar
January 12, 2019 at 6:32 PM
The beauty of dawn, of the morn and of your heart, is reflected in your inspired poem, Andrea. Brilliant! Congratulations on your wonderful and well deserved recognition with POTD honors.. ~Susan
Walker Avatar
January 12, 2019 at 5:37 PM
Awesome, how you paint with your words, truly beautiful. Love, love, love the last three lines.
Lindley Avatar
January 12, 2019 at 1:54 PM
I commented on this poem this morn, my comment has vanished. I say again, truly exquisite poetry, revealing the heart and soul of a true poet! A fav, a right and glowing gem.
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