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Dawn Artist

Sunrise paints a new day The skies are a golden red The paintbrush lies with the Creator He is the All-wise Master Artist Each dawn, a blushing surprise. 11.05.2021 For Charles Messina's "Something Beautiful 5 line rhyme" contest

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Date: 2/9/2022 11:55:00 AM
I could see your poem as I read it. Moonlight, sunrise, sunsets, rainbows, nothing as beautiful as these could ever truly come from anywhere but heaven. God, the artist of the skies. I like this poem so much Jo. My favorite line is " The paintbrush lies with the creator" Happy to have found such a pretty poem. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 11/12/2021 11:19:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a lovely "Dawn" story you painted. Have a blessed day with your win...............
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Date: 11/11/2021 2:20:00 AM
It's amazing how many beautiful paintings are in the sky from the creator's brush. Wonderful poem, Jo. Congratulations on your 1st place win! Hugs Charlie
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Date: 11/12/2021 10:46:00 PM
Thank you, Charles:) you made my day:) it's true, none can compare with the Master Artist:)
Date: 11/8/2021 9:05:00 AM
I see the beautiful dawn in your brushstrokes, Jo. Splendid imagery.
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Date: 11/6/2021 9:07:00 AM
Sunrise is so beautiful. God's creation.
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Date: 11/6/2021 8:33:00 AM
Nothing more beautiful than a sunrise Jo, a wonder of his creation. Good luck in the contest. Tom
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