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Dawn

Dawn! glimpse through window... vision of breathtaking vermillion sky…glowing red dot.. Painter engrossed at work ~ May 11, 2022 For Nanni Poetry Contest Sponsor: Joseph May 25 syllables in total,checked by HMS.com Bite-size Poem 46 Poetry Contest Sponsor: Line Gauthier

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Eve Roper

Date: 5/27/2022 10:30:00 AM

Congratulations, Malabika, on your win in the Naani Form in Joseph May contest. Blessings my friend

Christuraj Alex

Date: 5/25/2022 9:28:00 AM

I was missing your poems for long. This has re freshened me. Congratulations!

Sam Kauffman

Date: 5/24/2022 12:01:00 PM

Mala, this is a rainbow of elegant images one flowing from the other until we stand back in awe to see the painting revealed. Wonderful flow! Congratulations dear friend. Blessings and hugs.

Valsa George

Date: 5/23/2022 10:36:00 PM

So many striking images strung together... vermilion sky, glowing red dot, painter with his palette of colors .... ! Beautiful....! Congratulations dear !

Paulette Calasibetta

Date: 5/23/2022 4:05:00 PM

A lovely write, Mala~congratulations on your win in the contest. :)Paulette

Joseph May

Date: 5/23/2022 1:43:00 PM

Lovely write Malabika, Congrats on your win

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/23/2022 1:07:00 PM

Congrats on your win with this lovely work.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 5/23/2022 12:58:00 PM

Congratulations on your beautiful win. "Dawn" is a great time of the day. Have a blessed day with your win...............

Anil Deo

Date: 5/13/2022 4:30:00 PM

Tommy and Victor got here before I did, and got the "thunder," and I agree with their comments. A quick look from a window ... Or at dawn, a longer gaze ... And poets see art galore. You too are AN ARTIST AT WORK. Good writing. Anil

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 5/13/2022 4:57:00 PM

Your comments are inspiring, Anil. I love art and art history…but I am not that skilled in art!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 5/12/2022 1:43:00 AM

And God saw how He divided the sea from the sky and saw that all was good.

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 5/13/2022 4:55:00 PM

Thanks, Victor. Gazing at sky at dawn, I feel the divine power.